| "Love of the Undead" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: ...i like it too much...please continue!!!
Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 19:51 CDT
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this is an awesome story! im not really good at giving people moral boosts, or anything...but heres my try...YOU ROCK!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! PLEASE!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me luvs it! Awesome writing! Good job to the both of you! Dam I wish I could write like that! You guys rock! Please update soon! It fuckin sweet!
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: saxuality On: November 24, 2004 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, I love the writing! You know a great deal about the English language (more than I). I enjoyed this and hope to read more! I have nothing to criticize because it's all good. Oh, and you're getting a little closer to making the guys seem 'real'.... but still gotta work on it a bit more ^_^
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Reviewed By: TPM-girl' On: November 14, 2004 07:24 CST
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Another chapter, I'm happy now!!!!! I'm really curious to see what happens next... "They seemed to be no older than 20 years old and they were perfect for Analisa and Trista's first meal." Hahaha, that was the best part!
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: November 12, 2004 23:05 CST
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i liked your story and i hope you two hurry up and update again soon! oh, and by the way, nice job on the editing. i haven't found any errors that made me want to puke like i have with some other fics i've read. so, like i said, nice story. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kurama_fan@msn.com On: November 05, 2004 21:02 CST
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*cries* how long of a wait!?! i wanna read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: TPM-girl too lazy to login On: November 05, 2004 20:34 CST
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You're mean... but... well... at least you won't stop the story. It's really good, people don't review because they're too lazy... like me right now... but wait... I'm reviewing... HEY PEOPLE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Luna Goddess of Foxes On: November 03, 2004 20:46 CST
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cool update soon, I loved it
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Title: w00t!
Reviewed By: saxman (ymtx81z) On: October 23, 2004 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Japanese names and non-standard names make it harder to follow the story. I think complex names are fine, but I think the use of 'both' complex and simplistic names is a smarter approach -- makes it easier to follow while still keeping the creativity there. Just a suggestion. I really enjoyed your composition here. It seems really interesting. I don't understand all of it because I have only read chaper 5 or whatever it was, but I can tell that there's definitely a good dynamic plot build-up there. The structure is excellent. It's well planned and thought out. I don't have much to complain about really. Keep up the excellent work and I hope my comments are helpful to the future construction of your story!
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Reviewed By: TsukiKid13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 18:23 CDT
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You get all tens im just to lazy to tell you that. Wait.....I already did that. oops. Anwya please keep writing. Just cause you dont get alot of rules doesnt mean your not loved.
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [logged out] On: October 14, 2004 01:35 CDT
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great story! and here is a review for you! update soon!
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Reviewed By: TPM-girl' On: October 10, 2004 22:16 CDT
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1)I'll give you 5 reviews per chapter if you want, but DON'T STOP UPDATING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! 2)That was a mean cliffy... but I like cliffy! They're fun! 3)Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Reviewed By: TPM-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 23:31 CDT
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I'm reviewing again... update, pleeeeeeeeeeeease!
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Title: Oooo...
Reviewed By: KuramaIs4Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 01:24 CDT
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I wanna know what happens next. You know, you are really good with suspence. I like that about your stories. If not enough people review, then I will. ^^ I think you are an awesome writer. Of coarse, I tell you that everytime I review. See ya on the next chapter. ^^
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Title: hehehe...
Reviewed By: TPM-girl' On: October 02, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm really dying to know what happens next, so... HEY PEOPLE, REVIEW BECAUSE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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