| "When Hope is Far Away" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: LUCIFARA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
please hurry up
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Reviewed By: Phoenix_Dragon92990 On: January 13, 2005 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was great. But maybe you could change the writing style a tad bit. It got a little confusing between the second chapter and the third chapter. Who won the battle, Kai or Zakuro, and did they end up going out or what? Anyways please continue, it's getting really good.
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Title: cool...
Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This rocks... you mind sending me a pic of Zakuro plez. thanks. and update soon. i want to know what happens next
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Title: Meep!
Reviewed By: kinaihirihiwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hallo! I love your fic. Heehee Zakuro sounds kinda like me...sometimes. Anyways, WRITE MORE!! *puppy eyes* please? And, could you please send me a picture of Zakuro? I'm really curious to see how she looks like. And Kai! Aww he's so cute I luffles him!! XD Keep up the good writing (oh Dranzer I sounded like a teacher...but oh well)
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Reviewed By: Kage_Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 16:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool! I love your fic! Update soon! Kai is so cool! >w< I love him!!
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