| "I'll be there" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: poisoncandi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update you only just started this to end it so soon! and i think neji/sakura is a good mix (sorry emo boy you had your chance)! please continue
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Reviewed By: natsumi_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-favorites- I love it soo far =D Although it's a bit too suspenceful for me(hehe). Please keep writing
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Reviewed By: sharingan216 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ey! ur fanfics really cool i liked it even though im not a sakura neji supporter. i think neji goes wit tenten and of course sasuke and sakura
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Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is enjoyable, and very good for a first, but there are a few things I'd like to comment on- First of all, the chapters vary greatly in length. And the story moves much too quickly- Not that I'm saying move things slower, but you jump from scene to scene with little to none transition. And the argument between Sasuke and Sakura was a bit too dialouge-laden for my tastes. There were two paragraphs of what they yelled, some overly OoC, some revealing stuff that they wouldn't have actually yelled, and then... Yea. Just had to say, it didn't have the effect that I thought it should've. Also, you state many things rather bluntly, and I found it odd that Sasuke called himself a "black-haired freak". Wouldn't it have been better without a reference to his hair colour? But, all in all, this story's a somewhat satisfying read, and I do hope you keep on writing, and take my comments as constructive critism. ^-^
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Reviewed By: mar25n On: February 11, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just like your fanfic... continue writing! and i hope you'll update soOn!!! :-D
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Title: loooooooove it man ^.^
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u sooooo have to update I love this story. But I'd do much worse if Sasuke said all that garbage to me I'd leave him in a dumpster a bloody pulp (srry if that no make sence hehe) W00T GO SAKURA! anyways.....wat I really came to say is I love...this story lol! okay I'm gonna go in 5...4...3...2...1...0 kkkkkk BYE!!
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Title: even better... =)))
Reviewed By: kakashi's girl On: January 25, 2005 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, this latest chap was soooo cute!!! I really liked the talk scene between kakashi and sakura!! well, this fic seems to be getting even better... can't wait for next chap!!! update soon, plz!!!! =)
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Title: yay! another chap's up! =)))
Reviewed By: kakashi's girl On: January 18, 2005 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! oh, I like this story so much!! I was really happy when I saw the lattest chap. was up! and even more happy when i saw it was good!! =)) I guess it's gonna be NejixSakura and SakuraxSasuke, huh??? you could also write about naruto sticking up for sakura... hmmm... a mysterious person walks up to sakura... who could it be... my guess is that it's kakashi-sensei ^_^ though it would be really cool if it were lee... u're not gonna make another KakashixSakura pairing, are u??? anyway, cool fiction, i loved it so far!! keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 20:47 CST
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hahahahahhaha i lopved the whole bathroom scene it was awesome. please as soon as you can update i would really love to know whats going to happen next so pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee i'm begging you update as soon as you can. Ja ne Airy
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Reviewed By: joann On: November 04, 2004 02:18 CST
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for your first fanfic you're doing pretty well.. but i do wonder why you pick neji to room with sakura... hints of nejisaku pairing? anyhow, update soon please!
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Title: Aww
Reviewed By: Selphie Branford [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good, though I think all of them moving in is a good cause. Try to think of why Oro-sama murdered her parents.. And yes, the whole Neji-kun deal getting to room with her was kind of unexpected. Please keep writing. I know you haven't gotten alot of reviews but I hope to see more. If not, I'll just look at your other fics, ne?
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