| "Something About Us" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: amazing
Reviewed By: Dark reality [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was was heart stopping, i was drawn in more and more as i read on. you have a lot of talent, you had a good descriptions and a wide vocabulary of words with only minor spelling errors. you really brought out the emotions and would draw anybody who is interested in the relationship between kairi and sora. i also liked how you did it on one screen instead of chapters with their own screens it is a lot easier to scroll down to continue, rather than click on to a link page to continue story. you must write another one now that you have drawn in people who want to read on. keep up the awsome work.
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Reviewed By: NightmareChief56 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 06:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good! Sequel! Sequel! PLZ! It's good!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow, that was good. this is the first kh fic that ive read, so you did me justice. i think ill check out your other fics now. ^_^ (i cant believe you only have two reviews! i want a sequel!! o.o )
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Title: INTENSE
Reviewed By: Samantha300 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE IT WAS AWSOME IT MADE ME WANNA CRY AT THE END.ITS INTENSE REALLY INTENSE THAS WHAT I LIKE ABOUT IT.
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Reviewed By: 999RavenMaster666 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I just got back on the internet and found this one. Please let me know if you make a sequel because this is now one favs. Thanks for writing it!
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