"Book of Sands" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 08:24 CDT Comment/Review: Icky creepy nightmare....*shudder* I liked the story :D Yay :D....*waves* see ya laters :D
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Title: ChessyKat Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 00:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just read Hiei's and Kuwabara's stories back to back. You sent chills down my spine. I really enjoyed them. Please post Yuusuke's story soon.
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 06:19 CDT Comment/Review: Okay, it's me again...are you scared yet? lol Okay, really creapy....There's a reason I don't read SK...overactive imagination *shudder*...But, I liked the chappy...Just a few criticisms..."where" is "what place"..."were" is "used to be" and "scene" is "a setting"...Other than that...looked good to me :D
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 15:08 CDT Comment/Review: Still enjoy it...have to agree, a bit over dramatic, but...What's the fun of writing if you can't play with you characters? or someone elses :D
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 21:19 CDT Comment/Review: I like it :D I only saw one spelling error, but it wasn't a big deal, really. I like the story, though I'm surprised that Yusuke and Kuwabara aren't vibrating from the caffine...I feel like I vibrate if I over do the coffee...speaking of which, it's been awhile since I did that....lol :D I look forward to reading the rest of the stories :D
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