| "Duty Calls" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 03:01 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue with your story... it's got me so drawn in that I have to know what happens when they both realize the fireworks that just went off!! good story!
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Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko (not logged in) On: November 16, 2004 08:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Not a bad story, but it could use a little longer chapters. As for Kagome--her name is written in hiragana in the manga, and the characters translate into "basket weaver." I would know since I named my own daughter, Kagome (after this Kagome, of course, and my love for everything Japanese). There is a way to spell her name in kanji that means "divine protection," and if anything, Inuyasha might think her name is spelled with the kanji (as that was used mostly in his time to spell names, such as his own), so he might agree with the whole "divine protection" meaning. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to write another chapter? These two were great but really short!!! If you want some advice, Wirte longer more detailed chapters, and express the characters feeling more... (more around Kagome and Inuyasha) Other wise!!! Great so far!
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
It didn't suck, but it's kinda generic (not supposed to be an insult). It's a prologue. I can't wait to see where you take it when you get the plot going.
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