| "Soulmates" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: BOOGER!
Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah that was a really short chapter. You might want to redo it because it was really screwy. It's like the first word of every sentence was missing. It was probably your computer's fault I know how screwy it can be. But other then the fact that the first words seemed to be missing it was a good chapter. And one more helpful hint, you might want to put who is saying everything, because it tends to get really confusing. And maybe space it out a little. Maybe before your post your next chapter I can type it up for you. Just a little help for you. Keep up the great job!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
that was a really short chapter. you must have been lazy huh :) it was pretty good but how did they know to go to the old house? thanx for the new chappie.
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Reviewed By: kagome2242 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey thanks for writing me it semms ur the only one that r writing me but thanks any ways
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Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm.... a very violent chapter! But then again it is just Hojo we are talking about so I guess that it is acceptable! And one thing that I find super mega interesting is that one minute the girls are in Hot Topic(a very punk store) and the next they are in Rave(a very preppy store. That is cool how you arent labeled depending on what shop you shop in. Unlike in the real world. So my claps to you! Good Chapter! And update soon! Good Luck at Districts! Be happy you aren't swimming the 500 free! :)
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe hojo got his a$$ kicked. way to go xander. so what did kay buy that she didnt show???? otherwise great so far
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Reviewed By: Kagome59 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 20:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
great!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thx for the info on the characters. i cant believe there is so many. do i have to draw them too???? the first chappie was pretty kewl. will we get to meet the parents of the teens?
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