| "Lullaby" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is one of the sweetest pieces I've read (not just sweet as in 'awww' but sweet as in great too.) Many times her dad is just passed over, or his death is addressed but not the psychology of its affect on Kagome's life. good job weaving Inuyasha into it too. beautifully done!
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! that was so well written it made me start to tear up and cry!!! Continue and update!
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Reviewed By: spdswyf On: October 10, 2004 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing else to say but, BRAVO!!!!!!!! Do not doubt your writting talents! They maybe emotional to you, but thats just how you pull people into your story. You left us apart of yourself. Again, BRAVO!!!!
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Reviewed By: ShagsChain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just plain beautiful. Definitely one of my favorites I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: October 08, 2004 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so wunderfull I cied!
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Reviewed By: inscense On: October 04, 2004 05:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading fanfics on mediaminer for over three years now. That said - this is the first fic i have ever reviewed. to put it simply: wow. it is very rare that i read a fic that moves me as much as yours did. thank you for that experience.
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