| "Double Trouble... plus one" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Title: needs work
Reviewed By: kaitio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i choose not to rate this fic in any other areas because there are a lot of things that don't really make sense. there is an abstract way in your writing that is pleasing yet confusing. with a little more work this story could become the best on MM. hoping to hear about the beta job, thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (not logged on) On: November 27, 2004 13:00 CST
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I luv your story!! Must...have...more!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: inumikogrlfluffs On: November 26, 2004 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is so kwaii! i think u spell things o.k. considering dat i like 2 write in e-mail language and dat i can't spell anything either. i totally luv dis fic1 please keep writing! sooooooooooo cul!
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Reviewed By: Evangelion842 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm a fan of I/K, but what ever is right for you is good for me, after all, you're the one writng, no one else, so I say they can kiss your ass. By the way, this story so rocks!
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Reviewed By: graciestanton On: November 25, 2004 13:38 CST
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thank ya for updating! i loooovvvveeeee this story! it's one of my favorites. if you make this a sess/kag im gonna murder you in your sleep!!!!!!!!! thanks again for updating!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 02:10 CST
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lol, it's me and sarah vs everyone else! We say Sess/Kag, and everyone is against us! hahaha
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_sweetie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 02:07 CST
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Loved the chappie! ^_^ I think Kagome should make up a really lame excuse, like 'Me and Inuyasha made the show ourselves, and we decided to put you in it!' but her friends are still suspicious, so they're snooping around. That's when they see Kagome with Kouga, Inuyasha, and Sesshomaru (dum dum dum!!!) LoL, I got a bit carried away, huh? Anyways, still a good chapter, thanks for updating quickly!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 20:05 CST
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Lol .. wow haha that was short .. ok well her friends are mucho annoying lol .. sometimes i just wanna murder them they annoy me so much all they talk to her about is that she should be going out with Hojo (who is completely stupid) and other useless things haha. Anyway update soon lol email me anytime too !!
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Reviewed By: NewYorker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really pretty good. I can find a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but hey! No one's perfect! It's coming along really great. To tell you the truth, I don't know if Kagome should tell her friends or not, but I'll love to see if she does! Please Please PLEASE! don't let the pairing be Sess/Kag or Koga/Kag. Don't get me wrong, I think the show would be a lot more dull without Koga, but I really don't think they're as good together as Kagome and InuYasha. Now Sesshomaru and Kagome? Please! Don't make me laugh! *laghs maliciously* MUAHAHAHA! This is really good and I really wanna find out what happens so I beg of you *gets down on hands and knees and bows franticallY* PLEASE UPDATE! ~NewYorker
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Title: oh yeah...
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 24, 2004 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And if Sesshoumarugal wants a Sess/Kag pairing, plz plz don't! I hate that pairing, that pairing's evil! Ok, you can do what you want, just don't make it so I have to hope against hope for an Inu/Kag-Kitsu
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Title: fine
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 24, 2004 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go ahead, tell em', I actually don't want to see how Kag'll weedle her way out of this this time.-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Sweetie (logged out) On: November 24, 2004 00:35 CST
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Goodie! That was a quick update! I don't mind cliffes so much as long as you PROMISE to update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 22:36 CST
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I really need to start logging in haha ... but yea anyway email me !!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl *not logged in* On: November 23, 2004 22:33 CST
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AH !!! OMG !!!! EMAIL ME !!! FallinAngel1690@aol.com lol wait ... please dont put her with Kouga .. id die ... seriously i would ... either a Sess/Kag or a Sess/Kag/Inu haha those are the best !! lol PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE EMAIL ME !!! hahaha
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON =)
Reviewed By: Foxfire_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE , UPDATE SOON , IF YOU DONT , WELL..........i WILL BE RTEALLY SAD *cries* KEEP UPDATEING , IT WAS AN AWESOME FIC, GOOD LUCK , MUCH LOVE TO YA =)
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