| "Double Trouble... plus one" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 19:19 CDT
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I lvoe this story, I hope you will update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 13:44 CDT
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inuyasha!!!!!!!! HE MUST BE WITH KAGOME!!!!!! KOGA AND SESSHOMARU CAN GO FUCK EACHOTHER JUST LEAVE INUYASHA AND KAGOME ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 13:41 CDT
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I love this! Please update and hopefully Inuyasha and Kags will make it through this.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 22:21 CDT
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hey really nice story.... yeah, my grammar sucks but as far as i know when you write someone laughing you don't write it 'haha' you write it 'jaja'... as far as i know and no, i'm not offended, i'm actually thanked for your correction and yes, english is my first language and i do have HUGE spelling and grammar mistakes. anyway! great story! =)
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 01:33 CDT
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hewwoo, i really like this story. it's unorthidox and full of randomness but you make it all fit so perfectly. great so far and i can't wait for more so update soon..oh and i don't care how long the chappies are (that doesn't mean make 'em three sentencas long, i'm just saying that i like yours the length they are) well till you update, ja ne. Zirra
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: April 28, 2005 20:01 CDT
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nice chapter! but i'd like to see longer ones ;). will you pick this story up later? cause ... that would be lovely...
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please finish the story! please let kag be with....hmm i was going to say inuyasha but that was sooooooo sos so so so so so so mean of him to put the rosary on her. kagome should break thru it and sit him into oblivion!!!!!!! i dont like any of these guys in the fic lol. they are all so cruel they just want a mate! but hey its your call so you choose who she is with. looking forward to your next update.
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Title: So sorry!
Reviewed By: Cutie Pie Hentai *not logged in* On: April 26, 2005 08:35 CDT
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I missed the last three updates so I just read all three at once. Your grammar has improved in the last two chapters and you've really gotten better with the dialogue. Now, for some honest critique- I think you may want to consider developing Sesshomaru a bit more. You've done well with the dialogue and internal thoughts/feelings of Kouga and Inuyasha, but Sesshy seems a little flat. If he's really going to be trying to win Kags, to keep from being OOC, you may consider working on justification of his emotions now so that it is more believable- even if his reasoning is because he needs a mom figure for Rin or he's just doing it to get back at Inuyasha (steal his girl since he can't steal his sword). Well, I look forward to more- good Miroku/Sango scene, BTW. 'Til next time, CPH
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Title: Sesshoumaru-sama
Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl *gah not logged in again* On: April 26, 2005 06:55 CDT
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Good Chapter, Sess/Kag all the way ^-^ InuYasha can go have his clay-pot they deserve each other for the times he hurt Kagome. And Kouga has Ayame. So im all for Sesshoumaru ^-^
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Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 23:02 CST
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Go with sess I dont know how to spell his full name
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: March 15, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should keep the origional pairing (inu/kags), but it would be fun to make everyone think it was one of the other 2. tee-hee. good job. update soon por favor!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SESS/KAG PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up i really like it.^_^
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inuyasha and Kagome!!!!!!!! i vote for them!!! FOUR votes...no, WAIT! TWENTY-ONE VOTES! one for each fingers and toes and my nose!! hehe i TOTALLY love the thing where sess is after kag too! i think they would make a cute pair, but i vote for INU/KAG!!!!! They are absolutely PERFECT, do you not think so too? ^^ sorry, felt like being all British on you all of a sudden; anyway, i hop you update soon!
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Title: INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: JackiaLioncourt On: February 26, 2005 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
INUYASHA!!! Can I give 100 votes for Inuyasha? Hey u should write to see who would be a better dad for Shippo...jejeje BTW the FF is going ggggggggrrreat!!!!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!! INUYASHA!!!
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Reviewed By: signinginsucks On: February 17, 2005 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn. i sounded like a bitch last time. sorry. too bad i can't delete that. anyhow, the chap was good. and i want them all to have her. just do a 4some.
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