| "A Corruption of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: A Corruption of Innocence
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 03, 2004 20:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Crimson Demon On: October 25, 2004 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good so far, and I really do hope that you continue this.
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Title: - -*
Reviewed By: HanyouGal (Offline) On: October 20, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geat story love the ending alot, keep going. HG
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was good ! You should make another chapter sometime ! haha
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 13, 2004 10:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yum! Admittedly, I can see both demons getting their rocks off by leaving Kag unsatisfied, but I can also see them um, doing other things to her. Is there going to be a second chapter sometime? You make it sound like there's a plot here somewhere and not just PWP.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great you are an artist.
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Title: hee hee
Reviewed By: monster kittie (notloggedin) On: October 04, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
way cool! I really like. Now, will there be a second part? I hope so. I'll be waiting.
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Reviewed By: jjjjjshygfha On: October 04, 2004 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked your story.i normallydon'twrite reviews because they are very inconvienient on this site for some reason but i liked your story so.. so update
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