| "A Corruption of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: tnew78 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Especially the ending where Kagome asked why she was the only one left unsatisfied. Ha! I want more of this fic. Please, please, please give me more. Do not leave me unsatisfied. **wink, wink**
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Reviewed By: unruly2love On: February 22, 2008 03:25 CST
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The very end was hilarious. Oh, and it was a very nice lemon as well. Swift thinking to bring in Kagura, that way Sesshomaru can still get the ransome and all that. While you could have gone into more detail, and more kinky, I can respect that you didn't. It was enjoyable and I thought you did a very good job.
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Title: Message From the REAL Kagome
Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 17:07 CDT
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EEWEEWEEWEEWEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints*
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Reviewed By: YO On: August 14, 2006 15:29 CDT
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This is an awesome fanfic, please write more! :( Pretty please?!? :D
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Title: A Corruption Of Innocence
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: anonymous01 On: December 29, 2005 14:27 CST
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I hope you make continuations to your story! I'd like to see what you'll come up with next! (this is a very intersting story line :D)
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Reviewed By: JadeWriter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, this was well written. I liked it. I also like the fact that it sort of ends in a way that lets the reader's mind take over. Nice job. ^_^
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Reviewed By: sesshy_lil_slut*not signed in* On: May 23, 2005 10:49 CDT
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the last comment was so true so i shall leave a review. the story was very interesting but maybe u should write a prologue or an epilogue. thx
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Title: try again
Reviewed By: RR On: April 25, 2005 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, you could try to make it more interesting.. good try though
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Title: Highly Erotic
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best lemons I've ever had the sensual pleasure of reading! You have a great talent with words, and I will be reading anything you write between Kagome and Sesshomaru.
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Title: A Corruption Of Innocence
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 18:13 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: fireprincess59
Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 11:51 CST
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This story was great, I usually don't read stories taht aren't finished but I made an exception today. Please continue this story. It was awsome!!!
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Title: A Corruption of Innocence
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 21, 2004 17:58 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! although it was a bit gross cuz girl on girl is a little on the gross side and i dont really like the sesshyxkag pairing but i do like the sesshyxkagura pairing so plz make another chapter! or a sequel or something!
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Title: Please write a sequel
Reviewed By: Jess AKA RoneMD On: November 14, 2004 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this fic. Can you please come up with a sequel!!! email me and let me know if your going to or not. imbrokendoll@sbcglobal.net
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