| "Moonlight Masquerade" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kayori [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAI!! PLEASE CONTINUE!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! *added you to fav* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!! WE NEED MORE Yue x Sakura Fics!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Doodles-Divine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! Beautiful! Words cant even describe it! Well i loved it. Wish there was more! Anyways great job! Love Doodles.
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Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 06:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very pretty, a lot like Clamp's own style actually. ^__^ Lovely sentiment, I'm glad they didn't kiss or anything cos it was much more meaningful & significant just as it was. I really like the angle you took with their thoughts about each other, it was believable & incredibly sweet at the same time. The language was very ornate, there were times when it was a bit much (we know Yue's gorgeous; lingering on the details can be counter-productive every now & then / don't think *quite* that much description of Sakura's costume was needed) but mostly it was lovely. & considering you said you'd only gotten into CCS recently, you had quite good ideas about the character's personalities. Overall, very nice, definitely enjoyable. A great first fic!
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Title: how sweet
Reviewed By: DarkHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, your story is so SWEET. The way you describe things, you sound like a pro. I wish i could write like that. And i really like the whole theme of the story. Keep writin!
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
that is so beautiful
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Title: awww pretty!
Reviewed By: niki&mika On: October 05, 2004 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo cute!!! I've never read a SakuraXYue fic before, but it goes really nicely!You're very descriptive in your writing but Sakura's eyes are green, not blue. In a way, I don't think you should continue it but it would still be great if you did. P.S. Could you PLEASE read my fics? PRETTY PLEASE?? Will be fovever grateful *puppydog eyes*
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