"The Forbidden Wolf" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 20:26 EST Comment/Review: That was great. Please update soon please. And can it not have a lot of fluff cause I hate when it gets all mushy and gushy. But please update.
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Reviewed By: Kayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 15:24 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 01:55 EST Comment/Review: UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Kayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 13:58 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like chapter 6 and 7. Update soonnpleaze. It's so cold today.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 01:58 EST Comment/Review: that was a good fight scene. it was pretty short, but that's okay. i forgive you ;)
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 19:57 EST Comment/Review: I loved it. Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 22:32 EST Comment/Review: very good chapter. i love Kakarot's killer attitude. she's worse thatn Hiei. i love it!!! it's going to be great when she's staying with them 24/7. i can't wait for your update.
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Title: Kayoko Reviewed By: Kayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 17:28 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi I have come to review again. Muhahahahhaha. I really like your story. Update soon pleaze.
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Reviewed By: Cherry Blossoms On: October 21, 2004 17:26 EDT Comment/Review: yay!! this chapter was really good!! update again soon please! and keep up the good work ^__^
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Reviewed By: Kayoko (not signed in) On: October 11, 2004 16:26 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a very interesting story. Pleeze update. It's very hard to find ficts that i like. Also i just want to tell you that foxes don't live in packs. They live with their mate and children (which leave a year after they are born).
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Reviewed By: Cherry Blossoms On: October 11, 2004 01:28 EDT Comment/Review: please continue!! this is great so far! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Kuranga On: October 10, 2004 20:58 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this story is great so far. i'm really enjoying it and cannot wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: Kayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 14:11 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like this story!
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