| "The Forbidden Wolf" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: ZoeSakura2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2011 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this fic, I want to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: ShikonNoKouken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 06:05 EDT
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Keep at it already. I got to know what happened next.
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Reviewed By: Yorukage Kikoru On: August 11, 2006 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If memory serves, I do believe 'musume' translates to daughter, not to woman (or whichever word you were getting at). If you need a translation website, http://linear.mv.com/cgi-bin/j-e/dict is a good one to use. Your story is an interesting read, and I hope you'll continue with it. Other than that, don't you think you're a little bit young for Hiei? ^.~ Keep up the good work! ~Yorukage Kikoru~
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 23:12 EDT
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There's nothing wrong with bi guys. It's jus Sean is always denying the facts he's gay or bi. Sean: I'm straight, DAMNIT! Ash: *pushes him away* see. gay guys kissing is hawt. I'm still waiting for Hiei and Kurama to kiss. Hiei: *fingers his katana hilt* There's no way in hell I would kiss the fox, onna. Kurama: My sentiments exactly. Ash: Boo! No fun! Anyway, great chapter, hope you update soon. I want to find out who that gy is. Also, check out my new fic. :3
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 15:44 EST
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. i love this story so far. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 21, 2005 18:45 EDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 21, 2005 18:44 EDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 06, 2005 21:27 EDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this soon.
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: Sam4357 On: June 24, 2005 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Youre doing great writing this, and i give you a 10-out-of-10 for my rating! And someone flamed u without even getting their story straight?
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Reviewed By: Araxiel (Can't be bothered to log in) On: June 13, 2005 19:56 EDT
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Heheh, everyone thinks it was all thanks to that arogant kajihenge. Hiei: What were you saying about me? Ash: Who said it was about you? Hiei:Know any other fire aparitions? Ash: Yup, loads. Hiei: Name one. Ash:ME! And Kakarot, although i don't know her personally ^_^; Anyway, back to the review: But nope, it was Kakarot. Woot! We loved this chapter, and can't wait for the next one. By the way, three different people count for this review. The other Baka's are just too lazy to do their own ¬¬ ~Ash, Alex, and Sean. (Told you he was Bi)
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 23:18 EDT
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Sweet story! I can't wait for the next chapter. -Ash I love the colours you're using! my favourite colours are silver and blue, and Ash's are black and silver.-Alex Again with the telling other people about me *glares* -Ash Eep -Alex Hope you don't mind me advertising on you reviews ^^; If you do, just remove it. People who like yuu yuu hakusho stories check out under contruction by Araxiel. -Ash
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Reviewed By: Aliah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 16:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story so far!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kayoko(nsi) On: March 24, 2005 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's still a very good story but can you add more gore and blood and killing? I love reading those fanficts. How is Kakarot associated with DGBZ?
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Title: Rating great
Reviewed By: HIEI_LOVERS On: March 21, 2005 09:30 EST
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Very funny. Wel, I asked you if this was going to have a lemon because a lot of the stories that have a hiei as a main character and has a pairing they always have a lemon in it. I think that is really stupid so I just asked. Though I don't know why they really critisized you just because of the title. I mean come on. She probably doesn't watch DBZGT but she watches rurouni kenshin so that is probbably why. A scale 1-10 I give you a 9 and a 1/2(half). I give you that just because of a couple of things but not much. ^_^ Please forgive me for my rating of how you are doing.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 14:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I like it. Please no lemons please.
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