| "Geniuses" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: hmph
Reviewed By: darlie On: December 30, 2005 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
three words.....THIS STORY SUCKS.
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Reviewed By: j0e-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha i actually thought of the score before it chose actually... this story definitely has potential, and as wary as most readers get around new characters... not worried bout mary-sues this time!!! :p Oy most poeple just don't realize the best way to insert own character is to give him/her alot of faults... anwayz enough rambling i relaly like the story, can't wait for you to add up the next chapter, and why don't you try putting it on FF.net? i know there's a higher percentage of good fics on mediaminer but fics of this calibre should be seen by more people... do it some justice y'know? anwayz laterrrr... -j0e
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Reviewed By: its me twilight aura! On: October 14, 2004 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
neji my hero!!!!!!!!! ~.^
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
spoil the plaot my *ss!!!!i wanna know!!!!>.
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
gewd gewd! need more of the kaida girl(or however you spell her name)-.- whats up with her and neji-chan?0.o well i like this change - of - heart with neji-chan!^^ please update!!!^^
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Reviewed By: Shariku Onikage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The genius part of Naruto is a great aspect to focus on, since the geniuses always seem to get frowned down upon, people preferring to promote the hard workers instead. It's good. You need to focus on your new character a bit more, if she is a new character. I know you haven't done much so far and there is the 'never around much' concept but there should be a bit more focus at least.
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey!i like this story ^^ so please update! you sure that girl is blind? must have three eye but cant see out of two ^^
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