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| "My Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: December 04, 2005 14:16 CST
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*snickers* Ryou and Bakura are just too adorable, and Ryou thinks like me a bit too much, It's eery, lol. Well, i"m glad Ryou finally realized he was falling for Ryou, and it came out great, go you *hugs* *supports you during the rest of your chappies*
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 14:25 CDT
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They're coming to Dordrecht, can you let them stay in my house for awhile, it's only a half an hour detour to Sliedrecht ya know *polishes halo* he, that would be fun but I'll save that one for own use, hi. Anyway I like there conversations. The way Ryou is confused all the time makes me wanna grab him by his collar and shake him. thanks for the update, I loved it
| Reviewed By: paniwi (niet ingelogt) On: September 20, 2005 05:01 CDT
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lmao cuz of 'koe'hihi, ik kan me gewoon helemaal hun voorstellen, met zn tweeen door Rotterdam *snickers* ow well. Another great chapter done by you, and I love they're coming together slowly.
| Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 15:07 CDT
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I love this story!!!! Please, you got to update! Did Bakura die?
| Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI, am I ever?) On: August 26, 2005 12:40 CDT
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Ya know, I hope Bakura manages to get Ryou a bit more loosened up...he'll die young of a heartattack with this attitude (I'm one to talk with my cynism, but that's beside the point) I loved the chapter, en je zorgt wel voor een leuk NL's avontuurtje he?
| Reviewed By: paniwi . On: July 18, 2005 10:00 CDT
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yeey, you updated...I'm happy now, and hey, ik heb nooit gezegt dat je dat boek in het NL moest schrijven, if I had to write stories in Dutch all of a sudden...I think i'd die! ANYWAY! I liked the chapter again, though sometimes it seemed a bit...overly neurotic and chaotic on Ryou's side (giggles). try to keep a watchful eye on that...otherwise, another great chapter *is now going to continue waiting til the next chapter* En ik heb geen emmertje vol geslijmd, kijk! *wijst omhoog* I even gave constructive critisism :P
| Title: eve(forever broken) to lazy to log in!
Reviewed By: GREAT CHAPTER!! On: May 20, 2005 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I"M SO SO SORRY! I HAVE EXAMS IN 3 DAYS AND I HAD TO LEARN! SO I HADN'T READ IT YET!! SOWWIE!!! ah well this is again a wonderfull/great/fantastic chapter from almighty Amy!! I really like the way you right! and Bakura is cool!! I'ts only pittyfull you didn't put the "mission impossible theme" in the story ^__^! and go Bakura for being so good in escaping! and is there someone in love ? *angelface* And I totally AGREE with Paniwi You should really write a book! you ARE really talented!! and I like the way you wrote how ryou thinks! really coool! and PLEASE update sooner because this was way to long! I almost died because I couldn't read further!! *cough overdrijving cough*
| Title: another great chapter!
Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI cuz she's at school) On: May 19, 2005 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..,.full of suspense, just what you need after a dull morning of english/aardrijkskunde (english-gland in brains having a meltdown) and CKV, I'm so glad you updated, woot woot, I still love the story, and I'm looking forward to the rest, I just can't get over the fact how you characterized Ryou, it's so damn GOOD!!! you are making me jealous! I'll be very mad at you if you won't ever write a book that you can publish...you got talent!
| Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! this is a REALLY good story!!! i luv it, its AMAZING if u overlook a few gramatical errors. (im sry ive never written a review with constuctive criticism im sry im im a bit mean)
| Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes you updated...just like you promised *blush* and thanks for thinking my fics are cool *hugs you and forever broken *wink* Ryou: great, isn't it bad enough I have to endure this in your msn and emails... Paniwi; nope, anyway, I -again- totally loved the story, and I don't think that you're gonna have to many chapters, the more the better I'd say. no fun reading a story again when you already know the answer ne? Anyway, I-am-totally-in-love-with-the-way-Ryou-acts. Geez, I'm like that too, always cynical about being a loner. hehehe, i love the way Ryou thinks and all, it's really new and refreshing after all those fics in which Ryou couldn't possibly be more uke then he already is. -_- THis is one of the most original story's I've read so far here, keep it up ^_^
| Reviewed By: forever broken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 01:27 CST
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yaaay.. you finnally updated!!! now I'm so happy! btw sorry for whining and stuff! I love it I love it! geez.. I'm getting annoying now.. sorry for that! It's a great chapter by the way! but why is ryou thinking so negative about himself? ah well never mind. hum hum hum.. sorry humming again! well... I don't know anything good to review so sorry for that! see you at msn ^_^ and please update REAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLY soon! I wanna read further!! bye bye
| Title: goob
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 03:14 CST
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goood, sorry for not reviewing your latest chap, I just read it, school's being a bugger and all soooooo, well you fill in the rest. Don't forget, last time I reviewed I had only read up too chapter 4, but I'm finished now and I'm totally in love with this story. Bakura should take Ryou back in time in his mind or something, than he'll remember everything again, right on!!!! Anyhooble, I'll keep on reviewing you're story, I like it, plz update very very very soon
| Reviewed By: forever broken/eve On: March 15, 2005 11:24 CST
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Great story, just great, and by the way... I'm not that good but don't you write jami with a Y? just asking... btw your story is great! though paniwi's are better *no offence* (I had to say that, she made me *pouts*) nah just kidding. and please write fast ^_^I want another chappie!! bye and see ya!
| Title: paniwi
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 10:29 CST
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alright I just read the first 4 chapters, and I think it's a cool story, just a couple of things. 1. Authors notes in the middle of the story are alright, but you don't have to explain every single thing. 2. All those Japanese words are kinda annoying, most ppl here are aware of words like kawaii, bishounen aso, but not entire sentences please. 3. you're final and worsts mistake (not to be taken seriously, it's just me and my phobia) GOUDKUST *starts gagging* ONDERWEG NAAR MORGEN!!!! *starts gagging even more* and worst of all!!! 'GOEDE TIJDEN SLECHTE TIJDEN'!!! *pukes mmmh, as you might have noticed by now, yes, I'm dutch *cheers* *chants* wilhelmus van nassauwe heeft even voor mij...omfg, I did not just did...right!?!? oh en, mazzel, en groetjes aan Daphna (ik MOEST gewoon wat in het nederlands zeggen, dat moest gewoon)
| Reviewed By: paniwi (from the netherlands wheew) On: March 11, 2005 10:26 CST
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alright I just read the first 4 chapters, and I think it's a cool story, just a couple of things. 1. Authors notes in the middle of the story are alright, but you don't have to explain every single thing. 2. All those Japanese words are kinda annoying, most ppl here are aware of words like kawaii, bishounen aso, but not entire sentences please. 3. you're final and worsts mistake (not to be taken seriously, it's just me and my phobia) GOUDKUST *starts gagging* ONDERWEG NAAR MORGEN!!!! *starts gagging even more* and worst of all!!! 'GOEDE TIJDEN SLECHTE TIJDEN'!!! *pukes mmmh, as you might have noticed by now, yes, I'm dutch *cheers* *chants* wilhelmus van nassauwe heeft even voor mij...omfg, I did not just did...right!?!? oh en, mazzel, en groetjes aan Daphna (ik MOEST gewoon wat in het nederlands zeggen, dat moest gewoon)
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