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| "My Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 12:58 CST
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yeey, all ended up well! I'm sort of sad that the story is over now, but all good things must come to an end, I'll be sure to read your GW installments!
| Reviewed By: Ara-san On: February 17, 2006 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an exelent chapter, I absolutely love your creativity and style. The voice you put in your writing is just wondreful. Can't wait till you update.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (nli) On: February 15, 2006 08:21 CST
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ack *bitchslap* such suspense, he better not die, btw, Ryou doesn't need to press a button, if someone flatlines that the doctors immediately know about it, the machine-thingie tells them that. oh and: Your brother is a touch guy. Lol, I htink you meant 'tough guy'
| Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: January 11, 2006 14:31 CST
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*frown* it had been so many chapters since the story telling came in I had almost forgotten. Blech, I don't want sad endings, I dooooooon't.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: December 25, 2005 07:03 CST
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that long confused sentence was so funny, i fell out my chair laughing, also when Bakura said the brother-thing Ryou reacted with: Please note my world just crumbled in a split second" echt gewoon zo'n droge opmerking, lol. Well, Bakura is hopelessly out of character, but he's so lovable in your fic it doesn't really matter. Technically i loved the chapter and I was going like : damnit, Kiss eachother already! lol please update soon
| Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: December 04, 2005 14:16 CST
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*snickers* Ryou and Bakura are just too adorable, and Ryou thinks like me a bit too much, It's eery, lol. Well, i"m glad Ryou finally realized he was falling for Ryou, and it came out great, go you *hugs* *supports you during the rest of your chappies*
| Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 14:25 CDT
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They're coming to Dordrecht, can you let them stay in my house for awhile, it's only a half an hour detour to Sliedrecht ya know *polishes halo* he, that would be fun but I'll save that one for own use, hi. Anyway I like there conversations. The way Ryou is confused all the time makes me wanna grab him by his collar and shake him. thanks for the update, I loved it
| Reviewed By: paniwi (niet ingelogt) On: September 20, 2005 05:01 CDT
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lmao cuz of 'koe'hihi, ik kan me gewoon helemaal hun voorstellen, met zn tweeen door Rotterdam *snickers* ow well. Another great chapter done by you, and I love they're coming together slowly.
| Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 15:07 CDT
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I love this story!!!! Please, you got to update! Did Bakura die?
| Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI, am I ever?) On: August 26, 2005 12:40 CDT
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Ya know, I hope Bakura manages to get Ryou a bit more loosened up...he'll die young of a heartattack with this attitude (I'm one to talk with my cynism, but that's beside the point) I loved the chapter, en je zorgt wel voor een leuk NL's avontuurtje he?
| Reviewed By: paniwi . On: July 18, 2005 10:00 CDT
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yeey, you updated...I'm happy now, and hey, ik heb nooit gezegt dat je dat boek in het NL moest schrijven, if I had to write stories in Dutch all of a sudden...I think i'd die! ANYWAY! I liked the chapter again, though sometimes it seemed a bit...overly neurotic and chaotic on Ryou's side (giggles). try to keep a watchful eye on that...otherwise, another great chapter *is now going to continue waiting til the next chapter* En ik heb geen emmertje vol geslijmd, kijk! *wijst omhoog* I even gave constructive critisism :P
| Title: eve(forever broken) to lazy to log in!
Reviewed By: GREAT CHAPTER!! On: May 20, 2005 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I"M SO SO SORRY! I HAVE EXAMS IN 3 DAYS AND I HAD TO LEARN! SO I HADN'T READ IT YET!! SOWWIE!!! ah well this is again a wonderfull/great/fantastic chapter from almighty Amy!! I really like the way you right! and Bakura is cool!! I'ts only pittyfull you didn't put the "mission impossible theme" in the story ^__^! and go Bakura for being so good in escaping! and is there someone in love ? *angelface* And I totally AGREE with Paniwi You should really write a book! you ARE really talented!! and I like the way you wrote how ryou thinks! really coool! and PLEASE update sooner because this was way to long! I almost died because I couldn't read further!! *cough overdrijving cough*
| Title: another great chapter!
Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI cuz she's at school) On: May 19, 2005 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..,.full of suspense, just what you need after a dull morning of english/aardrijkskunde (english-gland in brains having a meltdown) and CKV, I'm so glad you updated, woot woot, I still love the story, and I'm looking forward to the rest, I just can't get over the fact how you characterized Ryou, it's so damn GOOD!!! you are making me jealous! I'll be very mad at you if you won't ever write a book that you can publish...you got talent!
| Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! this is a REALLY good story!!! i luv it, its AMAZING if u overlook a few gramatical errors. (im sry ive never written a review with constuctive criticism im sry im im a bit mean)
| Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes you updated...just like you promised *blush* and thanks for thinking my fics are cool *hugs you and forever broken *wink* Ryou: great, isn't it bad enough I have to endure this in your msn and emails... Paniwi; nope, anyway, I -again- totally loved the story, and I don't think that you're gonna have to many chapters, the more the better I'd say. no fun reading a story again when you already know the answer ne? Anyway, I-am-totally-in-love-with-the-way-Ryou-acts. Geez, I'm like that too, always cynical about being a loner. hehehe, i love the way Ryou thinks and all, it's really new and refreshing after all those fics in which Ryou couldn't possibly be more uke then he already is. -_- THis is one of the most original story's I've read so far here, keep it up ^_^
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