| "Dégager: The Saiyajin Pet" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Jennay On: January 13, 2011 16:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow its hard to find a well written and creative DBZ fic these days but I'm glad I was lucky enough to stumble upon this. Its so engaging that I literally could not stop reading until I finished. Personally SSJ4 is my favorite form and you portrayed Goku perfectly as a pet so props for that. I'm also a Yamcha fan and though its sad to see him die it made for a great ending. Overall freaking awesome fic! |
Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Chamequine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2010 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story! Absolutely love how it turned out! You should do a sequel of it. It would be awesome!
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: October 01, 2007 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story!!! Will there be a sequel still?
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Reviewed By: Mimie On: May 21, 2007 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story! I love the Vegeta and Goku interaction, though I wish you could make a sequel about Goku and Vegeta in their world, or between Leon and D. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was beautiful. I like it a lot. Very nice. It's nice to see someone make use of SSJ4 in such a creative way. You had me from beginning to end and I do hope for a sequal. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 14:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this. I know nothing about PSoH, and honestly that kept me away. I'm SOOO glad that it was recommended at the Salon, 'cuz that gave me the push I needed to jump in--and of course, my lack of info on PSoH did not detract from my enjoyment (erm, at least that I know of...) of this great story. I love your other stuff, I don't know why I would like myself be intimidated that way! The title also threw me, honestly, because the way "dégager" is frequently used in French is "get (the hell) out!", as in "Dégage!". So I was kind of expecting a hostile pet, LOL! Anyhoo. I loved K's character in this, especially his story as described by Count D at the end. Searching and finding the perfect mate--how beautiful! Your writing exudes sensuality, and the dream sequences are so erotic! I loved how we saw several sides of K, in human and SSJ4 form. I could just see him in his greenhouse, waiting for his "friend". Poor conflicted V, never being free in his perfect human world. I'm so glad he got out. Maybe you should put a warning in for character death, though, as some people are REALLY sensitive about that kind of thing. Bravo, and bravo again. I'll never look at K in SSJ4 the same way again!
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Reviewed By: Kitauri a.k.a. fyrechylde On: February 03, 2006 13:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This must have been truly inspirational. I have never come across another fanfic like it....and you know how hard it is to find something rare and beautifully unusual. This was utterly spectacular darling! The originality of the plot was daring and the characters were completely true to themselves. It's sad that this fic hasn't gotten the recognition it deserves and I intend to change that. Best of luck to you darling.
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Reviewed By: bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 14:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cool! you should do a sequel. that would be awsome!
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Reviewed By: Kiarene [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 02:15 EST
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Oh wow. Your story was fairly unusual, and I love the melding of the DBZ and PoH. And somehow, everyone, especially Vegeta, managed to remain in character. Great job! *claps hands* Your fic was captivating and pulls the reader along at a nice clip from start to finish. I did wish though that you had written more at the end, after Vegeta had transformed and the two left.
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Reviewed By: Ravensky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well what can I say...I couldn't stop reading it and when I had to I was straight back it the next chance I got. Your style of writing is different in a way but I can't place my finger on how it is. This story did not bore me like most fics do and I can't wait until I read more of your wonderful stories. I'll be recommending you to all my friends for your wonderful stories.
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Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I have 6 of the Pet Shop of Horrors manga and about 30 or more other kinds. i think I'm obsesed. Ohh well. I realy enjoyed reading this story I hope you keep writing your very talented. :)
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 03:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg...this fic was absolutely EXTRAORDINARY!!! i fucking LOVED it! one of my top fave i've read this whole year!!!
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Reviewed By: momijifan@sailormoon.com On: October 18, 2004 19:41 EDT
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WOW taht was the best fanfic that i have read in a while
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Elenek (not logged in) On: October 10, 2004 21:52 EDT
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This was wonderful!!! I loved it. I'm a fan of both series so I just found it absolutely fabulous! *Grin Grin he he clap clap clap clap clap* Thank You for writing. -El-
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Title: GOOODD!!
Reviewed By: Silver_Yaoi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is soooooooo GOOD! I truly like the idea of a ss4 Goku as a pet! Nice work!
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