| "True Calling" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Write more!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 15:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my God, you have to write more now! I mean, as soon as you read this! I want to know how it continues! Meow... (insert paw-print here)
|
Reviewed By: dentelle_noir [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea. it's differnt and enjoyble. You have some major formatting problems, though. you may want to take a look at it once more. Very great story. Keep up with the long chapters!
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 23, 2004 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I know someone is good at writing when I know they are writing angst and I keep coming back for more. I love the character depictions you have made and the pace of your story development. I want to read more about Heero erg Odin and Duo so update soon and keep up the great job.
|
Title: ch2/3
Reviewed By: priscel *OI* On: October 21, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrr i left out words ...*...and it made me halt a few seconds ...*
|
Title: ch2/3
Reviewed By: priscel *OI* On: October 21, 2004 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*goes to website noted at top of page* ohhh colors... *then scrolls down to the bottom of the page and clicks the 'part 4' repeatedly to only see white, then pouts* i didn't want to stop reading... I'm so glad that..uh Odin decided to stay and help Duo, I only hope he stays a bit longer atleast until the snow stops completely and then forgets to leave *smiles* The images that flashed and caused Odin pain, I figured that even if he J didn't actually get him and keep him. He must have done something to him and evidence is in this chapter. I'm so happy that J couldn't touch him anymore, but wish he didn't have sell his mouth for a little dough *personalnote: I think i get too involved with the story because a great deal of Duo's reflections on lives and the suffering he sees is very similar to mine and it made halt a few seconds when he wished there was more he could do.. being nearly in the same position but not quite* Man duo's almost dead on his feet he needs a few winks and soon. hmmm Are we going to see Trowa, Quat and Wuffers soon? It maybe too early though *nibbles on her bottom lip* i remember J saying that the other g-boys are probably hiding in the L-2 cluster of clonies, probably the very colony Duo and Heero are on!! I wonder what the guy is like whose's in Duo's place? I wonder if the parts Duo needs to get will lead them to coming across the other pilots? Because the other pilots' gundams are in need of repairs... They'll be needing parts too.. Oi!! update soon!!
|
Title: ch1
Reviewed By: priscel *blinks* On: October 21, 2004 16:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW!! I sooo want Duo to come across heero! He's in need of little kindness right about now. I love it!! Onward!!
|
Reviewed By: ?!? On: October 14, 2004 05:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Sad, but good. Imaginative and well-structured. A few (very few)grammar things here and there, but overall very well-written. This story really touches the heart. You have a real gift there. I hope you update soon.
|
Reviewed By: indentured On: October 13, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok...i noe the ratings seem a bit overboard, but honestly, anyone who noes how i review also noes that i dont give into niceties such as awarding 10 for just ANYthing...lol. so, i guess wut i mean to say, is--this is a DAMN good story in ALL aspects, let alone the story line itself! i luv it! i have never b4 encountered a telling of gw like this before--i can't help but ache with suspense at wondering 'if heero's not a pilot..and duo's most DEFINITELY not a pilot...WHO IS?!' it's so awesome--can't wait til a few mysteries get cleared up! ^^ keep up the GREAT work, and update soon!
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 12, 2004 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very sad, too sad, but well writen. Keep up the good job.
|
Reviewed By: fire of phoenix On: October 07, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. just enough angst for me and so very believable. while i was reading the story i started to feel the harsh coldness from the story. wow
|
Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 06, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! For a what if story, you have taken the right amount of time to make the story evolve into a plausible story line. Too ansgty for my taste but beats any other author that just uses sexual violence because they cannot come up with enough believable 'anguish and torment' material. You have great writing style which captivates any reader into wanting to read more. Update soon and keep up the great job!
|
