| "A DEVILS GAME" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay Love the story. Need to finish it!!!!! It says completed and I will have Kouga hurt you if you don't finish the story
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Reviewed By: Vampiress_agome On: June 20, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your story your spelling and grammer was a little off but i still emjoyed it very much so please hurry if u want and add more PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 12:51 CDT
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what do you mean who cares? i care and i want to know whats going to happen next so please please as soon as u can update. I wanna know whats going to happen next, its an awesome story. so please as soon as u can update. Ja Mata ur ever faihful reader and reviewer Airy
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Title: A DEVILS GAME
Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original and captivating. Chapter six was absolutely beautiful. I hope the rest is just as entrancing.
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Title: Name ideas
Reviewed By: Forever Kougas [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the last chapter was even better than before. you are a very talented authoress. anywayz, here are my ideas for what you could name the baby. for a girl, Tamashii which means soul, and for a boy, I was kinda thinking of Kiba which means fang and I think that it would fit the son of Kouga. Oh, and another idea for a girls name is Miharu, it means guardian, kinda like how Kagome's the guardian of the Shikon no Tama in the series. Thank you so much for answering my question, I really apreciated it. Please up-date as soon as you can.
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Title: The greates story read yet
Reviewed By: starfirecoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally had time to read this chapter of this story from begining to end. I have to say this is the most well written fanfic I've read yet. Though I miss Shippo, Songo, Miroku, and Inuyasha in it, you have masterfully done a story where they aren't needed for the storyflow to move seemlessly. I'm not one for Kouga and Kagome pairings, (I prefer Inuyasha and Kagome pairings) but you've written it extreamly well. Sheesh I can't say it enough. MAsterful storytelling. I hope you have Kagome fall in love with Kouga and forget how she became with his child. Because it would be sad if she hated him through out the story. Man this story is good I don't usually write such a long review. but I can't help it It's great. The Title of my review says most of it. It is the greatest story I've read yet. Of course it may get dethroned if I read something better but I doubt it. Please, please, please write the next chapter as soon as posible. I really like to see how you continue this story and how you develope the characters. Also I'm curious about what name you're going to give the resultant hanyou of this union. I'll hate you if you even DARE have Kagome about the pregnancy if she escapes (which I hope she forgets about). I've enjoyed this story so much that I've found myself writting a long review. Please keep up the good work and don't be stingy with the story.
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kicked ass kicked ass kicked ass. please don't stop it was getting really good and i can't wait to read more. Whats giong to happen to Kagome? Will KOuga win her over or will she escape? Please update as soon as you can i really want to know whats going to happen netx. Itb was awesome don't stop writing it. Ja Ne Airy
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Reviewed By: Forever Kougas [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you updated. Fanfiction.net is way to strict with their rules. This story rocks and nothing was wrong with it. I am so glad that you are still posting it here. I cannot wait for your next chapter to come out. If you are curious, I am Lady Hisui on ff.net. I love your stories and writing style. Question: Will Kagome ever be able to see her family and friends again? You don't have to answer if you do not wish to, I was only curious.
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Reviewed By: Xhy'Lanka On: October 14, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!!!!^_^ I'm glad your still updating this fic.I was very displeased when fanfiction.com deleted it.This has quikly become one of my fav kouga X kag ficts. Althought we haven't seen much interaction yet. It's still very good and interesting.And of course, as i pointed out in the other review i made at fanfict, your writting style is suberb.THe subject is also very original, don't think ive seen anything ressembling this before. Very well explained and great use of words.I have to say, the story is progressing nicely, not to fast or slow and we get to see more of how Kagome copes with her situation.Althought i have to say-I CAN'T WAIT for her and Kouga to talk and interact with each other.Aside from when they first met, we haven't seen them really be together.:(. So i definatly can't wait for future update.I hope things work out beetween them.And of course i'm hoping for a happy ending...and lots of kouga XD.But anyway, i love your story and am glad that even thought it's removed from fanfiction.com that you found a place to put it. So all Kouga Kag fans out there can read it... Great work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ceylse On: October 10, 2004 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story so far I love it Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bloodroseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is very good. I like the story line and it's coming along nicely. Keep up the good work ^_^
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Title: i got a name!!!
Reviewed By: sesshomarugirl56 On: October 09, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its just keeps getting better and better Icant wait to see what happens next!! and I got a name ! mabe you could name it Kimi and it means she who is without equal! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Mandie On: October 09, 2004 20:01 CDT
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Hey. I like you fic. I hope that you update soon. I will keep checking back for updates. I'm curious as to if Kagome is going to escape or not and if she will fall in love with Kouga.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 14:26 CDT
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this is great! i luv kag & kouga, update soon!
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Reviewed By: starhealer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, glad to see the story up on MediaMiner. I've been following the story on Fanfiction.com. Now, I can get an email everytime you update the story!^^ I don't think they other site has that. I haven't figured out how to use it anyway. lol
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