| "Black out" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 14:04 CDT
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I like! well done.
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Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 23:57 CST
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wow...O.O...wow...wow...whose the guy. don't remember if i overlooked it. more...wow. unbelievable.
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Title: Please make a second chapter?!
Reviewed By: Chocolate Cheese Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 20:15 CST
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I do believe a second chapter is in order...I mean, he DID tell her to wait for him, didn't he? It feels like there should be moreeeee....sequel!!!!!! I love it though! Or I wouldn't be asking for a sequel.^_^
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Reviewed By: LiLaZnDrEaMeR [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
You write very well...it was an interesting one-shot...quite the contrary...
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Reviewed By: ktakn_yeni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good. i liked it. ^^ even though. it could have a better ending
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