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Title: chap 50
Reviewed By: Mim On: February 26, 2005 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOOOORE!!!! waaahhh!!!! *puppy eyes* ^_~
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 12:32 CST
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Wow, all caught up... what an epic! I just love the depth of this story! And now... off to place themselves in the hands of the enemy! It had to happen, didn't it? They have to get control of themselves, and get protection... the question is, is Kritiker going to take them in? Treat their wounds? I need to know! Update soon, ok?
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Title: chap 49
Reviewed By: Mim On: February 22, 2005 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not usually a Schwarz fan, more just for Schu, but you are doing such a good job with this one you got me hooked. I especially like your Farf, he behaves truly weird sometimes (what was that with asking for a towel on the boat anyway *giggle*). poor Schu though. *pets* and I like that you had Yohji in there for a bit, I hope he comes back, Schu could use his help, in more ways than one. ^_~ now, more, you! *nailbiting* ^_~
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:24 CST
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I'm not far into this fic, but I am delighted that there is more to read. I love Schuldig's voice and how he waffles between strength and misery. I really like how you have treated Farfarello, too. He comes across as dangerous, and confusing, but not a gibbering self-satire. The glimpses of humor and home life of Schwarz are wonderful, too. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nice touch with the contrast between the bulk of the chapter -- the somewhat mundane reality of attempting to lose themselves and any pursuers with the shock at the end. Please come back soon, and let us know what happened to Crawford.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, another great chapter. Poor Brad and Schu, yet another failure to communicate. It appears that the relatively quiet time in China has not relieved any of Brad's stress, and given his "gift", how could it? Please keep coming back with more of your terrific story.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter! The pain of conflicting desires and commitments, very realistic dilemmas, pain and comfort. More please soon?
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Interesting relationships, and a great mix of suspense and warmth. I hope you follow up with the WeiB version of events as well. In the meantime, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: shourin On: December 12, 2004 23:52 CST
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thank you for the lovely update.. so let me guess.. schuldig meet yohji again after this.. and he give in to him right?? heheh.. i dunno.. hope that brad will be more gentle to him and schuldig keep his temper in check...thanks again for this update ... more please... i'll review more..
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Reviewed By: shourin On: December 09, 2004 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic.. keep up the good work... i'll keep waiting for your new chappie.. really love those bradschu relationship in your pairing.. brad act as a good leader in order to lead his fellow teammate.. he's tender to schu in his own way.. controlling him and not spoiling him though he love that guy so much.. right?.. i love that kind of brad... hope to be more brad schu romance in the future and schu to understand brad's love for him.. ohh.. really thanks a lot for a great fic.. i'll wait for your new installment..
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Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: November 27, 2004 13:36 CST
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This fic is just getting better and better! It seems Crawford wasn't able to resist Schuldig any longer..... Thanks for sharing the fic with us. Please don't stop writing it ^_~
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Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: November 11, 2004 18:09 CST
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Yay, so many new chapters! ^_^ *is happy* I love this fic. It's unusual to see Schuldig being written as so caring, but it's a nice change and it doesn't seem unrealistic or improbable to me.
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Reviewed By: CC On: November 08, 2004 19:39 CST
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Yay, you updated just for me!(Yea, so I'm a little delusional). I'm still loving this fic. Crawford as a farm kid... I don't think I've ever heard that before. Very interesting. Here's hoping you'll update again soon!
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Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: November 05, 2004 17:05 CST
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I'm always happy when this fic gets updated, it's one of my favorite works-in-progress. Motto motto onegaishimasu!
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Reviewed By: CC On: October 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Wow, I'm really enjoying this story. I hope that you will write more soon, I kinda hope that they all survive in your epiction. Update soon!
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