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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a breakthrough! Hurray for Schuldig, and the turning of an important corner. More, soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 12:31 CST
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Wow, awsome chapter! So, for Schu, it is possible to love more than one person at a time. Interesting. And to have such an epifany, he needed it! Now maybe he can go on with a much better life... Update soon, ok? I can't wait to see what else you have in store for them all!
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Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 07:38 CST
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Hi, I haven't reviewed in a while, mainly because I had to study for an important exam and couldn't risk distractions especially if they were in the form of a wonderful and so very very long fic. But now I've finally read all chapters that are out, and damn, they're good. ^_^ The Schuldig/Yohji dynamic is so delicious, but I feel really bad for poor, even though no longer blind, Crawford. I'm really torn between hoping for more Yohji in this fic and for Schuldig and Crawford to finally figure out what Rosenkreuz did to them that holds them back and to overcome that. Thanks so much for this great fic!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 22:13 CST
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interesting chapter! A much more responsible Schuldig? Somehting you almost never see! Update soon, ok?
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Title: shourin
Reviewed By: Shourin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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At last!!!! i can write reviews for you again....!! ok.. to the review!! your story... as usual and ever.. it's nice.. and wonderful... keep it up! i don't have any comment on the storyline or whatsoever, but i really wonder when Schuldig will realized that Brad cared? and i also wonderin.. do brad really love schuldig.. or he just afraid? i'll be waiting patiently for your new instalments!! thanks for the wonderful chapters..
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 19:43 CST
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Oi, I'm getting scared... I'm beginning to understand Farfello! what does that make me? *blinks* I hope that tea helps with Schu's memory, he needs all the help he can get! You gotta update soon, ok?
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Title: chap 50
Reviewed By: Mim On: February 26, 2005 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOOOORE!!!! waaahhh!!!! *puppy eyes* ^_~
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 12:32 CST
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Wow, all caught up... what an epic! I just love the depth of this story! And now... off to place themselves in the hands of the enemy! It had to happen, didn't it? They have to get control of themselves, and get protection... the question is, is Kritiker going to take them in? Treat their wounds? I need to know! Update soon, ok?
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Title: chap 49
Reviewed By: Mim On: February 22, 2005 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not usually a Schwarz fan, more just for Schu, but you are doing such a good job with this one you got me hooked. I especially like your Farf, he behaves truly weird sometimes (what was that with asking for a towel on the boat anyway *giggle*). poor Schu though. *pets* and I like that you had Yohji in there for a bit, I hope he comes back, Schu could use his help, in more ways than one. ^_~ now, more, you! *nailbiting* ^_~
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:24 CST
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I'm not far into this fic, but I am delighted that there is more to read. I love Schuldig's voice and how he waffles between strength and misery. I really like how you have treated Farfarello, too. He comes across as dangerous, and confusing, but not a gibbering self-satire. The glimpses of humor and home life of Schwarz are wonderful, too. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nice touch with the contrast between the bulk of the chapter -- the somewhat mundane reality of attempting to lose themselves and any pursuers with the shock at the end. Please come back soon, and let us know what happened to Crawford.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, another great chapter. Poor Brad and Schu, yet another failure to communicate. It appears that the relatively quiet time in China has not relieved any of Brad's stress, and given his "gift", how could it? Please keep coming back with more of your terrific story.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter! The pain of conflicting desires and commitments, very realistic dilemmas, pain and comfort. More please soon?
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Interesting relationships, and a great mix of suspense and warmth. I hope you follow up with the WeiB version of events as well. In the meantime, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: shourin On: December 12, 2004 23:52 CST
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thank you for the lovely update.. so let me guess.. schuldig meet yohji again after this.. and he give in to him right?? heheh.. i dunno.. hope that brad will be more gentle to him and schuldig keep his temper in check...thanks again for this update ... more please... i'll review more..
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