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Reviewed By: shourin On: December 09, 2004 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic.. keep up the good work... i'll keep waiting for your new chappie.. really love those bradschu relationship in your pairing.. brad act as a good leader in order to lead his fellow teammate.. he's tender to schu in his own way.. controlling him and not spoiling him though he love that guy so much.. right?.. i love that kind of brad... hope to be more brad schu romance in the future and schu to understand brad's love for him.. ohh.. really thanks a lot for a great fic.. i'll wait for your new installment..
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Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: November 27, 2004 13:36 CST
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This fic is just getting better and better! It seems Crawford wasn't able to resist Schuldig any longer..... Thanks for sharing the fic with us. Please don't stop writing it ^_~
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Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: November 11, 2004 18:09 CST
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Yay, so many new chapters! ^_^ *is happy* I love this fic. It's unusual to see Schuldig being written as so caring, but it's a nice change and it doesn't seem unrealistic or improbable to me.
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Reviewed By: CC On: November 08, 2004 19:39 CST
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Yay, you updated just for me!(Yea, so I'm a little delusional). I'm still loving this fic. Crawford as a farm kid... I don't think I've ever heard that before. Very interesting. Here's hoping you'll update again soon!
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Reviewed By: mel^_^ On: November 05, 2004 17:05 CST
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I'm always happy when this fic gets updated, it's one of my favorite works-in-progress. Motto motto onegaishimasu!
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Reviewed By: CC On: October 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Wow, I'm really enjoying this story. I hope that you will write more soon, I kinda hope that they all survive in your epiction. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: indentured On: October 13, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting fic u got going on here...i beleive the grammar/spelling was actuall on point, but due to negligent skimming on my part i rated it one down just in case (^^ srry srry)--but anyways...intriguing in the sense that the two enemy teams...are FRIENDS? wow...ok. style is a bit abrupt--but very concise which is extremely helpful to the reader. nice job on conveying the relationships between shu/nagi+yo/shu.. keep up the good work, update soon--cant believe this didnt get more comments--ppl are too cruel.
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