| "The Saiyan Facts of Life! Teaching Goten" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: yaoi_lover On: September 14, 2006 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that was hell of fucking funny, the end was hillarious, and I dont think that you made Goten to inocent, his character was perfect and sutttle enough to add hummor. it took me a long ass time to read it though, it was definatly long, but great, couldn't help but love it. Awesome fic, keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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O.o That was interesting. I like it.
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Title: Nice!!
Reviewed By: Trunks lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too cute!! That part when they were eating dinner was hillarious and i thought it was a good story.
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Reviewed By: rose of vegeta On: October 12, 2004 17:58 CDT
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Loved it. It was comical and serious at the same time.
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Reviewed By: Kitkat not logged On: October 09, 2004 19:33 CDT
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Very funny story! As well as your previous one-shot, "Goku gets a prostrate exam", that was the funniest story i've read latelly. I'll stay tuned for the next one-shots you write. You seem to have a natural talent to humor fics. Keep up the good work! (this is the review i don't remenber if i posted at SS list) The best parts in my opinion? Ok here we go: Goku saying "If you're lucky ha ha." and the mention of Yamcha. Those were the best.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:18 CDT
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I adored this piece on SaiyanSlash and just had to read it again when it appeared here. Yes, I laughed out loud again. Scared the neighbors. Goku's fantasy is something else! The narrative has a light touch, the writing is good, and the characterizations of Chi Chi and Gohan add some realistic wistfulness to the comedy--so that when the outrageousness materializes in that funky little mind of Goku's--oh my, I could just pee on myself!
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