| "Unspoken Promises" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: sylviaviridian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 14:12 CDT
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Wait...you're going to stop writing? Sweet gods, why?! This fic is absolutely beautiful, wonderfully written, especially as it continued. The first chapter could have been a bit better, but the rest of it often had me practically in tears. Don't you *dare* stop writing these!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very enjoyable and well-written. I'm a big Yohji/Aya fan and the way you moved between and beyond the series bringing the two back together in the end was wonderful! I do hope you will consider writing more Y/A fics as you tell a great story. Thank you for sharing.
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Reviewed By: Elisabeth On: November 01, 2004 05:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. The characters where amazing and I liked the plot.
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 01:25 CDT
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It was fanastic. You did a nice job writing. I enjoyed reading it....I hope you'll write more Y/A fics. :)
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Reviewed By: mini-chan On: October 15, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! I love this fic ^o^ My favorite pairing!! PLEASE DON"T THINK OF STOPPING TO WRITE FICS EVER!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work! Hope to read more of your fics in the future. (^_-)
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 11:23 CDT
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Waaaaah, never write again?? Are you CRAZY?????? I haven't read something that has made me feel so much for the characters in so long. I'm just sorry I can't articulate it well enough to tell you, this ranks right up there with other great fic writers. Don't think otherwise. It'd be a shame not to see more from you and a huge loss to the YoujixAya fandom.
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Title: buenagirl13
Reviewed By: buenagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. I absolutely loved this fic. My favorite pairing has always been YxA. Hope to read more from you. ^_^
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Reviewed By: etsu On: October 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
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beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. You drew your reader in masterfully and made them feel for the characters. I don't think i have ever read a Yohji/Aya I liked more. I hope to see more fics by you.
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 11:51 CDT
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Loved this chapter. I hope there's more. You do such realistic and amazing fluff! Not to mention the angst! What I forgot to mention in my last review is that you should post this on the YoujixAyaML on yahoogroups. We're starving for fics over there!
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 16:25 CDT
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Wow, I'm just speechless. I just don't know what to say. When you describe their actions toward each other it just makes me melt. I can't articulate it well enough but when I was reading it, I could feel what they were feeling through your words. Gah, I wish I was a better reviewer. I am TREMENDOUSLY enjoying this story and I noticed that you update daily so I can't wait until tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: kato_c On: October 13, 2004 16:23 CDT
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Wow, I'm just speechless. I just don't know what to say. When you describe their actions toward each other it just makes me melt. I can't articulate it well enough but when I was reading it, I could feel what they were feeling through your words. Gah, I wish I was a better reviewer. I am TREMENDOUSLY enjoying this story and I noticed that you update daily so I can't wait until tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 18:14 CDT
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Two excellent chapters! I can't wait to see what happens next. I love that Yohji doesn't rememeber their first time, what a great twist!
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