"Mistakes of the past" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: November 16, 2004 18:13 CST Comment/Review: Great chapter as always D. I want wait to see more. So he didn't mind holding her hand huh? That can only be a good thing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged on) On: November 15, 2004 23:25 CST Comment/Review: i like this story so far. i read your dance on ice story awhile ago and i really enjoyed it. keep updating!
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Title: FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!! Reviewed By: Anne_WritinAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 13:23 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more ^^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 08:37 CST Comment/Review: coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: October 09, 2004 17:29 CDT Comment/Review: as always, its got the makings of a great one pulsing-chan. good luck with this one.
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