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| "Yu Yu Hakusho: The Black Roses" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Toguotheman On: April 04, 2005 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't bad, but it seems, well, sloppy. No worries, though; I've been there. Yous should keep improving on the plot. My only real complaint is that you made Juu so uber. I understand that that's the idea, but try not to take it too far. I enjoyed reading this, and I liked the humor featured. I'm looking forward to reading your story where you branch off from the YYH plot line. That should be interesting I recomend flushing the characters out a little better, especially Juu and Kat. Also, try to be a little more descriptive. Some action sequences were a little difficult to follow, while others just weren't interesting. Bleah, I'm so picky, it's not funny! Please don't take what I say too literally, they are meant to make suggestions, not nit-pick.
| Title: ^___^ UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: Kathrine Reverie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I love this, i'll send you the spelling and grammar error corrections via email, but great job so far. MUST READ MORE!
| Title: Update please ^__^
Reviewed By: Kathrine Reverie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XP I know you HAVE to have more chapters, UPDAAATE *pleads* (Heh, I figure you're working on chapter seven and i think it's only fics you skip in, not chapters. XD BTW, I should have AOD updated soon) By the way, If you don't have any chapters, send me something to beta please. ^___^ *likes to read your stories*
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