| "Pool Party" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: sg123animekid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know how all the girls who reviewed and said they were fingering themselves fell this fic was amazing
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Reviewed By: Kaitee On: September 21, 2005 15:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg. im just so horny! i cant stop fingering myself! now i need someone to lick my pussy hard...
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Reviewed By: Sexy-angel On: August 06, 2005 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW man!! i'm sooo horny, i love it wen they're fucking someone in d pussy and ass at the same time! write more!! and the girls wit dicks? I loved it!!
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Reviewed By: greebo45 On: August 05, 2005 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word creamed that was great keep writing
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Reviewed By: kassandra On: July 30, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO please continue that was wicked that made me so horny im fingering myself im so horny
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Reviewed By: jonnybaddazz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was really cool i hope to see another one soon
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Reviewed By: ??????????????????? On: May 26, 2005 21:50 CDT
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I'm so fuckin horny! i'm sittin here fingering myself while reading and i acutually cummed! my nipples are sooo hard! I NEED SOMEONE TO FUCK ME!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yurilvr On: March 14, 2005 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like tbis a lot! awesome job, i hope you continue this!
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Reviewed By: crescenttenshi On: March 08, 2005 21:25 CST
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i like this alot. the 2nd 1/2 is the best part.
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Reviewed By: OhneRammstein [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
you must continue this, I love it
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Reviewed By: yurilvr On: January 17, 2005 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww...that was awesome..
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Peachs hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic and if you plan to make a sequel, please don't include blood.
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Reviewed By: abigail On: November 30, 2004 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
you should write a continuation because this is interesting...
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist. Please make a sequel okay.
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