| "Red Blossom" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Reviewed By: picaresque [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 10:59 CST
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This chapter was just as awesome as the rest of the story! I look forward to another chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is one of the most action packed Naruto fics I've ever read. And it's not a bad thing at all in this case. Reading through the whole thing was a challenge with my brother and dad attempting to distract me but it was worth the eye strain in the end. I find this fic to be very descriptive and a great mind expander that makes you think your reading a script for an upcoming Naruto movie! (if only lol) I must say out of all the Team 7 fics this has definetely got to be my favorite so far. The characters are well within their original traits and the oc's are really great as well. My favorite 'scene' in all of the chapters definetely has to be the bedroom scene with Kakashi and the wife. I laughed so hard I cried for a while (my family thinks I'm nuts or something, sheesh can't a girl laugh at a great story?). I hope you update soon with a new chapter and don't keep your fans in suspense too long! Best wishes
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Title: 10
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story, almost like a screen play, I could totally see a movie being made of this. Lots of danger, action and cerebral moments! Too funny with the hippy dippy actions of the feudal lords wife with Kakashi and Naruto's comments, I am amazed he didn't fall off the ceiling!! Please update with this story, I am waiting to see the next development of the ninja wars. Taishorin
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Waterdude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really is an amazing story. Realistic characters, engaging story, suspense, and a good dose of action. Like some others have mentioned, I'm amazed at the lack of reviews. Again, you might want to try posting on fanfiction.net to increase your potential audiance. But regardless, I'm very much enamored with this story. Please keep up the good work!
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Title: This story is amazing
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 23:05 CDT
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You give the Naruto missions a more realistic feeling, the story is impressibly well written. I wish I could write like that:-(. Please keep the story going.
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Reviewed By: Ninja-234 On: May 14, 2007 17:53 CDT
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Can't they just use Kage Bunshin to do it for them? They have unique chakra systems, after all.
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Reviewed By: picky reader On: May 14, 2007 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so well developed. All of Kishimoto's characters are portrayed so perfectly. I could easily see this story becoming one of the Naruto movies in replace of what's been created. Please finish and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story. I like that it is different from most of the Sasuke, Naruto, Sakura Kakashi fanfics I have read. Can hardly wait for the next chapter to be written.
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Reviewed By: vesper On: April 20, 2007 18:20 CDT
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Hey, come on now, write the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: vesper On: April 15, 2007 22:42 CDT
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I love this fanfiction, you're the best writer I've seen yet. You've really done a great job developing the story. Also, for some reason when you use japanese words in your story it doesn't seem cheesy like in other fanfics. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kohmaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you're doing a great job- I can't imagine why you don't have more reviews. In some places it gets a little slow0 I think Kishimoto would probably give one of the oc's more of a back story - maked them more sympathetic (so thta one they die we cry) other than that great story- your fight scenes are really well done and you do a fairly good job of keeping everyone in character. If you haven't already, you should consider also posting your fics on Fanfiction.net as I think they tend to have a larger reader base- so more reviews to feed your ego (always nice) I look forward to reading more (off to read more of your fics) cheers
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Reviewed By: Wonderland On: January 28, 2007 21:24 CST
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Great story. Can't wait to see how it goes. Update soon please. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Vanquisher [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another brilliant chapter. Keep up the excellent work! If only he'd used his Sharingan Sasuke wouldn't have fallen into such a simple trap :(
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Reviewed By: Sakurako On: November 30, 2006 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a GREAT fic, please update soon as I await the next chapter T0T I can't believe the little amount of reviews this fic has received. The plot itself is very unique and not just the usual "Sasuke returns after 5 years and he meets Naruto blah angst blah" The idea of this mission is well thought out and I especially love the way you have portrayed the OCs. Though this is really not a truly bad thing and no offense intended, the unoccasional updating can get me off track and I forget the events that occured before so I'm lost when I read the new chapters. Keep up the good work and hope you keep writing ^0^!~
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH?! Only 9 Reviews?! You're joking me! This is a beautiful piece. I'm loving every chapter. The detail, the precision, the plot, everything. They're always in character. Although there is more drama in this than in the real series, your style even somewhat coincides with Kishimoto-- always throwing in the occassional laugh. The only part confusing is the 'Water Lord' in the grand scheme of everything, because the Mist country IS the Water country in Naruto... And then there's the Rain? I'd like to know which island that is on the map, just out of curiousity. Since everything you think through is so thorough. Also, though it doesn't really bother me in the least, you lean a little too much toward Naruto-Sasuke Kakashi-Sakura teams. It's obvious that would make most sense in formation if need be; Naruto and Sasuke would always keep each other in line and Kakashi is the strongest out of them to protect the more vulnerable Sakura. But, considering the split up has occurred numerous times, it's becoming repeatitive. Mostly it just gives KakashixSakura idealists (since you already shooed away the SasukexNaruto fans) a reason to hop on their seat in this fic, and I'm pretty sure that's NOT your aim. Other than that... It's just all so perfect. I'm going to crawl in a hole and die if you don't update soon. PLEASE. Let this sedate your review cravings just for the next chapter at least?
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Reviewed By: picaresque [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic that stays very close to the storyline that Naruto has going. I can imagine it as just another day in the life of Naruto. Your characterization is wonderful you do a good job at keeping their personalities the same as we know them. When they have dialogue it seems just like they are talking or that they would say it. I'm happy to see you updated and I look forward to the next chapter. Until then~~ Picaresque
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Reviewed By: Vanquisher [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, finally an update on my new favorite cannon fic! Keep up the great work.
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Title: Awsome Fic!
Reviewed By: Vanquisher [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well long time no review write. Yo, Vanq here from Animespiral, took a while to track my favorite fic down but... here I am. Once again Sasuke is the god of cool and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Admantius [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 02:28 CDT
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I came across this fic a while ago on Tonfa, and fell instantly in love. It's very rare to find a well written fic of any kind, let alone one that doesn't focus on a relationship of any kind. You are pulling it off perfectly. I wish for you to post again soon, and appease my hunger! ~Admantius
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Ryla [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok,I've read a lot of fanfics but so far this is the best Naruto I've gotten my hands on. Great action, the characters are IN character, IT HAS A GENUINE PLOT, leaves me guessing and coming back for more. It's like another episode of Naruto and I'm glad you took the time to write it up:) I'll be back!
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Reviewed By: Sky1991 On: January 17, 2005 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TERIFFIC STORY, PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE ASAP
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Reviewed By: SKy_Fanatic On: December 07, 2004 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLEASE, both sites (fanfic.net)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 10:04 CST
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Awesome story. Keep up the excellent work. Coolsa.
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Reviewed By: DrakeDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, its a good story. please keep updating
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