| "The Iridescent Caress" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: kiune_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 19:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad. I liked how things are going. but did they have to believe the dragon so soon? Aw well, I liked it. Keep going, expect to hear from me again! ^-^ bu-bye
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Reviewed By: Cliodhna Glen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story you have started. There's scattered technical problems such as spelling and grammar errors in it, which sometimes are enough to detract from the plot. The pace of the story is slow, but steady, so it's average to above average in overall quality. If you find a good beta reader to help you tweak it up, I think it has the potential to become very good. :)
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting story...although I do have trouble believing that they would just *accept* the word of a dragon (or whatever, for that point) without really batting an eye...I have a lot of trouble with the plausibility of that...I wait to see what you will do next.
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Reviewed By: 00demonforever00 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOO!! i liked it! i meant to review more earlier, but you know how that goes... ANYWAYZ update soon!
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