| "Tormented" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: tails_the_pimp [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 18:12 CST
Comment/Review:
JUST PLAIN WRONG!!!!!
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Title: wtf
Reviewed By: sonicscrendude On: February 19, 2005 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a lot of sonic lemons out there and a lot of those lemons consist of the exact same thing not much of which is very interesting. This one is no different. I know what youre thinking "well Nick youre only saying that because some of the charecters in this fic are gay." well youre wrong, shut up. Besides You didnt let me finish, The reason why im saying this is because it follows the lemon codes. What are the lemon codes you ask? well its pretty simple,, main charecter F***s other charecter, main charecter gets into pickle, mc gets out of pickle either violently or explicitly, mc gets back to F***ing other charecter if character is still alive otherwise mc either finds some other charachter to F*** or weeps till conclusion. This story is decent but it does not do anything to liberate itself from the endless chain of sex sex sex. Out of pure queasyness I stamp this fic with a so-so 6 out of ten.
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Title: Short but cute
Reviewed By: Darkstalker X [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep going, this is getting interesting...
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Reviewed By: KittyHorse [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 02:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I read every chapter. I feel bad for Tails (he's my favorite character.) Grrrr...don't hurt my Tailsy! -_-; Sorry, I just love Tails so much. The relationship you made between Sonic and Tails is odd, but VERY cute. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inumaru12(it wont let on my name in this page) On: November 13, 2004 14:50 CST
Comment/Review:
that was good and you shold go with mecha scorpion that would be very cool. and i like you story alot too
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: Mecha Scorpion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 07:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've heard of Sonic-Shadow stories, but none where Shadow raped Tails and Sonic loves Tails... very cool. If you're planning a third chapter, it should be about Shadow escaping from prison.
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