| "Tension" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: TT On: July 18, 2005 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Almost almost, you can finish this!
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 15:43 CST
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Hey! you finally updated!! Yay! This was really good, I can't wait for you to write the next chapter soon, I hope you wont take as long as you did for this chapter. Anyways just a few minor mistakes other than that great story! I'll be waiting! JA NE!
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Title: Tension
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 11:25 CST
Comment/Review:
well just like vegeta to react the way he did...i'm glad that bulma is a strong woman..can't wait for more...update soon..maria
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Title: Tension
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 08, 2004 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't get enough of this story please update soon..i want to read how he's going to make it up to her..(smiles) i want more and soon...maria
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Reviewed By: vegeta1 On: October 20, 2004 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Longer chapters please and you need to work on openings and endings of chapters. and I don't even consider that to be lemon it was more like apples
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Title: "Tension
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was as clean as you can get..i only wish that in the series of dbz that we saw how they got together.but i do love reading about it...great chapter update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: Cooey On: October 18, 2004 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aarg - you're trickle feeding us this story and I so want to know what will happen next! It's a great fic. I'll be checking back for the next chappie!
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Title: "Tension"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for once i would love to read that vegeta is chasing after bulma instead of the other way..what would that be like i wonder..well update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: Monnie On: October 14, 2004 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should write longer chapters and work more on your endings.
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Title: "Tension
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story..i love the why they both are with each other..please update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: damion On: October 12, 2004 02:50 CDT
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Wow that was great!, i liked your writing style, and it was beleivable, enough sexual tension to defrost my freezer.
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