| "My Everything" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loving the story. nice job.
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Reviewed By: KamiKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story and can't stand that it's over. You have a great gift of writing, I hope you look into it more. Please return the reviewing favor and read my story. your newest fan, KamiKitsune
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 19:01 CDT
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I enjoyed this story very much. I would wish you turn this story into a full fledged story instead of a one-shot. I'm reviewing because you reviewed my story, Friends?, I guess a good deed deserves another. Anyway, good fic and keep up the great work ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 13:34 CDT
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Good story. Like all the thought you put into it. More than likely you probably already guessed about the spelling. That was all that bugged me at some points. This is good though. I'll check out your other ones.
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Reviewed By: zman_the_great On: April 13, 2005 21:50 CDT
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A great fic. Besides spelling, I only found 1 thing wrong with it. In every other fan fic I've read, Sesshomaru has been Rin's father, but I guess that's just me. Overall I give it a 9 out of 10. Good Job. zman
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 19:45 CST
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I am so sorry. I was looking at your stories and I can't believe I didn't review. Sorry. Anyways, loved this one. Great bit about Sesshoumaru bonking Inuyasha. Just what brothers do, later.
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 22:39 CDT
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Awe, cute story! I love it when Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha get along, or at least some what... ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 18:48 CDT
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again, a well-thought out story, but i think it could have used some revision work, you know? do you have a beta? you could use one. not somebody to criticize your work or anything, just somebody to help you with the spelling and grammer issues. if you would be interested, please send me an email at elf_hanyou@yahoo .com and i will be more than willing to be your beta, okay? other than that, i enjoyed the story. my one question (again) where did the song come from? who sings it? (sigh) i know, you would think i knew these things, but still! ja! ~hanyou-elf
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