| "VIDEO GIRL" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChibiSoliDuS On: May 02, 2005 08:33 CDT
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Great fic. Easy writing & reading, straightforward. Just the sex and no mess (damn all those plotdevices...) keep it going, i'll be rooting for u
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Title: Angel-Demon
Reviewed By: Anima On: April 12, 2005 22:51 CDT
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Heh, very good story so far, even if the writing style is a bit choppy (don't mind that, i don't think i could do much better). If you could combine the sentences and add a bit more description (preferably to everything except the sex as that already has enough description :-P). Maybe you should get one of the girls pregnant though? (considering how much he's been having sex with them I think at least one of them would be.) Anyways, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it's goes on like that then I can foresee for Ranma the same as for the summoner in Viper GTS. =) I.e. complete exhaustion. Anyway please continue as you are I like it as always. Many jealoes people are there when they find out... Bwhaahahah. I'm curious what will develop from here!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 On: November 07, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Take all of them By the By write quikly I read often.
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Reviewed By: koplex On: October 24, 2004 19:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope to read more. I hope you do add the girls of BGC to this fic.
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Reviewed By: Rob Roy Baars On: October 23, 2004 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it and would love to see those girls in the storie, it might be nice to get the cast of Nadesico in there as well.
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Reviewed By: vxc On: October 17, 2004 21:48 CDT
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Good chapter. This is was great story and I hope to see more soon.
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Title: Likes
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would like to see how the jealous boys handle the now 'popular' Ranma. What about his friends.. how they react to his new girlfrinds? Also I like to see Ranma with even more lemon... preverable Kasumi... but one can't get all. How about that Ranma must decide between those 3 girls at the end of the 30 days... Or will he get another girl(s) instead (of another Anime-serie)? Will the Tendos fight another for the attention of Ranma? Will he have a favourite or will he be as wishy-washy as in canon? But in the end that all is your choice... ;) Good lemon scene by the way!!! More please more of it!!!
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Reviewed By: ranryu26 On: October 14, 2004 03:14 CDT
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vidoe kasumi there is not a lot of thouse ou there and the ones that i have found are prety good lemon level the highest it can go
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Reviewed By: ex117 On: October 13, 2004 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vote for Kasumi - 1st choice. Vote for Nabiki - 2nd choice. Vote for Akane - 3rd choice. Hentai level - No limit.
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Title: Vote
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vote for Kasumi. Hentai Rating=through the roof ;) Please continue. It sounds promesing so far.
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Reviewed By: TheWickerMan On: October 13, 2004 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: emt10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very original. I vote for all of them
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Reviewed By: emt10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very original. I vote for all of them
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Reviewed By: TheWickerMan On: October 12, 2004 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice, i havent seen something like this before. Can't wait to read more. And for the choice. I choose all :D
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