| "VIDEO GIRL" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dcis1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
intereasting that you jump to them going to a club than Ranma having sex to the cops.King is a woman so when she and Nabiki were about to do it Nebiki ask if she was gay and she said no.How can that be if she's a girl having sex with another girl? Are You saying she's bi.I still don't get it and what about the female crook at Ranma's house,will he have sex with her or not.Continue writing.
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Reviewed By: DeafSnoopy69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story and would like to see more updates on this story as it is very entertaining to read.
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Title: Your fantastic fic
Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ejoying I did! Now is the question for Christie will reacht when she 'meets' Ranma and how she will react when she meets the 2 police woman. Also how many women can Ranma feed and fit into his house. ;) BTW a VERY nice Kasumi lemon. You made me an utter happy man!!!!!!!! Please update soon!
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Title: whoops !!
Reviewed By: Takumi Fugiwara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 11:31 CDT
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when i said magical well i meant magical springs
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Takumi Fugiwara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic but i think that you should incorporate something like the magical well... and i think that you should include Nibiki more because she's in my opinion the best of them all.
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Reviewed By: Skullhead On: July 18, 2005 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad at all and am looking forward to more in this story.
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Reviewed By: Boon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to toss Shampoo into the mix?
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Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds very promising...unlike the other ranma hentai horde stories it actually have some content...and seem to be new for very session...hope that well of iatneh doesn't run out...keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ken21 On: June 28, 2005 12:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE hurry wirh the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: ken21 On: June 25, 2005 18:38 CDT
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PLEASE hurry wirh the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: DC On: May 25, 2005 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simple and Dirty just the way I like it *****
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Reviewed By: ChibiSoliDuS On: May 02, 2005 08:33 CDT
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Great fic. Easy writing & reading, straightforward. Just the sex and no mess (damn all those plotdevices...) keep it going, i'll be rooting for u
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Title: Angel-Demon
Reviewed By: Anima On: April 12, 2005 22:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, very good story so far, even if the writing style is a bit choppy (don't mind that, i don't think i could do much better). If you could combine the sentences and add a bit more description (preferably to everything except the sex as that already has enough description :-P). Maybe you should get one of the girls pregnant though? (considering how much he's been having sex with them I think at least one of them would be.) Anyways, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it's goes on like that then I can foresee for Ranma the same as for the summoner in Viper GTS. =) I.e. complete exhaustion. Anyway please continue as you are I like it as always. Many jealoes people are there when they find out... Bwhaahahah. I'm curious what will develop from here!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 On: November 07, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Take all of them By the By write quikly I read often.
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