| "Misery" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: DemonessofReview On: October 31, 2004 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your idea, but you need to work on your grammer, spelling, and punctuatoin. It is a really good story and with a little more work (maybe a beta reader too) then it could be one of the best stories out there!
|
Reviewed By: Deidra On: October 16, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE!!!!! LEMON,LEMON,LEMON!!!!!!!!!!
|
Title: Its cute
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its cute cant wait to read more of the story.
|
