| "Giving In" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Diamond Lotus On: April 16, 2005 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good! It was very original for a one shot lemon! I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good writing!
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Reviewed By: kittycow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
>_< it says 5 reviews but only shows 2!!! WHY?!?!?! ARGH... if you want to make sure I get your review.. ~_~; go ahead and email me... i like that better anyway. ^_^v that way I can be sure to get back to you.
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Title: WOAH!!!
Reviewed By: Anonymous young man On: November 01, 2004 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very very very strange story, and pretty sick. I still haven't got to the point in which Kureno has been introduced and i hate Akito with all my guts. But it was a good story. Some parts in there were actually funny.
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: October 23, 2004 12:47 CDT
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OOOhhhh, this was sinfully good. I know Akito is a bit young in this fic (I don't usually go for that type of story), but with his forceful personality he might as well be a little older. Kureno does love him and has taken care of him since he was a baby. At least Akito's first time would be with someone who really cared for & about him. If you just happened to write a sequel I'd be sure to read it. (hint! hint!)
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Reviewed By: Kawaii__Neko On: October 23, 2004 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay Kureno x Akito! Akito is my favourite character off FB, and I absoloutely love yaoi. It's nice to see a story from Kureno's POV, its quite rare. And the descriptions of a young Akito... god they're so hot!
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Reviewed By: Hikari Nymph (not logged in) On: October 19, 2004 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hikari Nymph: * cries* I wish I could write that good...
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Reviewed By: candylady123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excelent absolutly awesome Illl be looking for more!!!
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