| "Is Desitny Always Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Horsegurl531 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleae write more chapters that was great i'll be waiting
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Reviewed By: sc86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 20:22 CST
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ok...you totally have to update!! i wanna know what happens...i know its been a while but still.Ahhh!! lol please update.
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Title: Ahrodity
Reviewed By: Inuyasha loves Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. I hope you will continue you story shortly. Great Fanfiction. Please read my three stories: 1) Seret Identities 2) A Love So Strong 3) I'm In Love With You My screen name is: Inuyasha loves Kagome. Once more, great story. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Genesis88888 On: January 11, 2005 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I really like Itsuma. He's so kawaii. I like the use of the japanese words, though for those who don't understand them, I might understand why. I like the plot and the writing style. Update soon! sayonara
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Reviewed By: AngelWendy On: December 04, 2004 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is definitely original..and in a good way too. I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. I've always had conflicting opinions/emotions about mamoru and about chibi-usa. I like how chibi-usa is a minor rather than a major character. I don't hate her but she's not my favorite either. I say keep using all the demo's and other non english words you like. Anyways...enough about my ramblings...Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Lady_lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This story is great! ^.^ KEEP WRITING! I do wish the chapters were longer, but I understand how hard it can be to get an entire chapter down! *~ Lady Lotus ~*
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Reviewed By: Faeza On: November 28, 2004 22:29 CST
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I really cant wait for another chapter... Please put them soon! I really like the story. Its great. I love it. Keep writing. Fast. Muahah! Just kidding. Well, no actually. I REALLY am desperate to read. Reead. I need a new Chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Faeza On: November 27, 2004 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, It's different and fresh. Keep it up- The only thing i didnt like was using the "demo" and other non-english words cause :D i dont understand. Well, i just cant wait for you to post another chapter! Gotta remember to be patience. Well i cant! Heheh. Great Plot.
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Reviewed By: lady_lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this story is GREAT! ^.^ I must say I don't like the way you sub in "demo" for "but", however I still like the story! Write a new chapter now!!!!! And, for the record, Usagi has GOOOOT to be with Mamoru! She must! *~ Lady Lotus ~*
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Reviewed By: S.D. On: October 15, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, where is the rest? Cool Story1 Spirit Dragon
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