| "In Bed With the Mob" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2012 07:47 EST
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Nice addition to this series. Glad Naraku got what he deserved. |
Title: You've been nominated!
Reviewed By: Auraki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 14:51 EST
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You have been nominated at The Readers Have Chosen! Each week readers and authors alike select their favorite fanfiction to recommend for the Weekly Recommendation Poll, and your story has been added to our Poll! The voting will end on Saturday at midnight (PST), and the results will be published on the main website on Sunday. Thank you for sharing with us and good luck! Visit our forum to make your own recommendations or to just to read good fiction. Site (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / index . html Poll (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / forum / index . php ? board = 6.0
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Reviewed By: soulwriterchick On: April 14, 2005 15:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was rather hot! I absolutely adore Kagura/Sesshoumaru stories. It really could have worked out between them. Sigh. But I have a question: what was Kagura's last regret? I read the chapter twice but still didn't get it.
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Reviewed By: kgirl On: November 14, 2004 02:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome conclusion to naraku and kagura's dealings... and a very hot lemon! ;] i love how all your stories are so original! it makes me enjoy your stories even more! ahhh i love your writing, i hope you won't stop writing fics for a long time... i'll definetly miss your writing. well as usual i'm not disapointed and i couldn't remember reviewing this chapter so here i am! :] well i'll definetly be there when you next update
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 20:50 EST
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(glomps) what an amazing story! i can't wait for the next one (panting) the next one is miroku and sango, ne? these are really amazing and i totally enjoy them. (i hope meche gets better soon, i know how frustrating it can be to be sick and unable to do what you need to do)
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku is in jail! Mwahahahahahaha! life sentance is way worse then death sentance. Not that i have any experiance it just seems worse. I love Kagura/Sesshy fics. Sesshy can be such a cool character with the right author.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 03, 2004 18:34 EST
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Beautiful chapter. So, you finally got rid of Naraku, good riddence to bad rubbish they say. Oh, by the way excellent lemon once again, subtly played out and in tune with the story. Sorry, can't vote. This one lives outside the US. I...am really having trouble knowing what to say, I'm only glad I could help. Honestly I'm suprised there aren't any other guys...oh well, they're loss. If I might ask once more question...what sign? (Sorry, I know, to many questions but I've always been interested in star signs...personally I'm a scoprio, seeing as my birthday is in...3 days.) Ok, well thanks for telling me I avoided a hole last time, hopefully I can avoid it this time as well. Sorry for taking up so much space in a review for non story related stuff. Good luck with the GREs! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: SAT
Reviewed By: Sats On: November 03, 2004 11:06 EST
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SATS ARE EVIL! OMG I have to wait for 4 more year s and then it will become MORE harder -- life is cruel
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Reviewed By: NetealiaLaneFoxwood On: November 03, 2004 00:16 EST
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Good job i love all three of them. keep up the good work with all your stories... ~foxy~
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Reviewed By: katie keita On: October 29, 2004 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool,
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (not logged in) On: October 22, 2004 19:01 EDT
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umm... what was her secret? you didn't exactally explain what it was just that he found out. It may have been obvious to others, but with me you usually have to be pretty blunt and to the point.
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so enjoyed this story. At first I wasn't all that into Kag/Sess stories. But writers like you, smittin kittin, and a few others changed that for me b/c of HOW you write it. I would love to see you do a full blown AU story with Sess or Kag or Rin even. You are do AU really well and the different twists work. I truly enjoyed this. And the scene had inspirations in it to-well done.
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so enjoyed this story. At first I wasn't all that into Kag/Sess stories. But writers like you, smittin kittin, and a few others changed that for me b/c of HOW you write it. I would love to see you do a full blown AU story with Sess or Kag or Rin even. You are do AU really well and the different twists work. I truly enjoyed this. And the scene had inspirations in it to-well done.
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Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so enjoyed this story. At first I wasn't all that into Kag/Sess stories. But writers like you, smittin kittin, and a few others changed that for me b/c of HOW you write it. I would love to see you do a full blown AU story with Sess or Kag or Rin even. You are do AU really well and the different twists work. I truly enjoyed this. And the scene had inspirations in it to-well done.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likey me likey alot I cant wait to see wut is goin to happen next and wut is up wit Kagome and Inuyasha???
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 19:29 EDT
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(grr!) i love fluffy-sama and kagura stories! (sorry i didn't do the first chapter until just now, i didn't have a lot of free time) but you have a wonderful story going and i so can't wait for the conclusion. and the piece on miroku/sango (?) i love this story and i hope they can work everything out. they deserve to be happy, ne? great job!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 20, 2004 17:16 EDT
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That was fantastic! I can understand why this got nominated, you have a magnificent talent for writing lemon scenes that are more than mindless sex like so many others, instead they flow with the story, each moment giving a deeper and deeper insight into the characters minds. An absolutle masterpiece. But, now I have to go...the entire female cast are presently chasing me and I'm looking for somewhere to hide... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: October 19, 2004 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story-I liked the sly humor in it also ("midnight snack" indeed)-please write another part to this-it was awesome and this should have more reviews! Hurry up, onna! (jk)- kls
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 14, 2004 19:55 EDT
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That was absolutely fantastic! Wonderful story! Really don't know what to say, like the way that worked out. Looking forwards to the next segment! Btw...how do you get out of this ladies dressing room? I appear to have ended up here when I left the other one...^_^; Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite who once agian.. didnt log in. On: October 14, 2004 16:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another awsome story! thank you for beign such a talented writter! and thank you for sharing your work with us!
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Reviewed By: minasraye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 16:19 EDT
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can we say sexy? i love sesshy and i can imagine him being a rough youkai in bed. (giggles) i love it! and i can't wait for what you do next! fluffy-sama, was kinky and sexy as hell. good job! update soon!
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