Reviewed By: Jade Butterfly On: September 11, 2005 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the fic, I really did... but, it seems a little rushed. I think you could've turned it into a nice long story. I would've liked that better. You didn't spend much time on how Inu felt about his changes, for instance, do you think he would've started right off thinking about himself as female? (reffering to himself as a 'she') If so, why? Did he always want to be? Also, you kinda threw Rei in there kinda sudden. Maybe writing a bit about him before having him meet up with Inu would have been a better idea. Just my thoughts. Anyway, I do love your writing, and if you want to get ahold of me, my e-mail is glittergal105@yahoo.com.au. Now, on with the fics!
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