| "Engaging Enemies" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: hmm789 On: February 24, 2008 15:21 CST
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okay. this is a good story and everything, but i have to point out somethings, i havent read the whole story yet, but, why does Kirara keep switching from, english, to french, and then to spanish??
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: March 11, 2006 18:40 CST
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i like this story. please update soon.
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Title: I WANT FLUFF
Reviewed By: I WANT FLUFF On: December 14, 2005 14:40 CST
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I WANT FLUFF! STOP MAKING INUYASHA AND KAGOME HATE EACH OTHER! FLUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUFF !!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Megumiinelite [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
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I am really enjoying this story, but the lack of who's saying what gets kinda confussing. If I read through it three or four tiems I can get it, but some times the dialog is still really hard to pin-point its speaker. update soon por favor!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life (not signed in) On: May 25, 2005 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another wonderful chapter but i have to ask, when is the fluffiness between inu and kag coming? how many more chapters are there? i love this story and i hope you update soon
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life (not logged in) On: May 12, 2005 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a good loyal reader, i added this story to my favourites a long time ago so i got the email telling me you had updated and i was so so so so happy. this is a really great story and it deserves to be finished so please finish it and keep up the awesome writing.
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Reviewed By: mikeslikb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 18:41 CST
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Its hard 2 read but its good and I definately want you to keep goin with this!
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Reviewed By: Aylum On: November 14, 2004 15:11 CST
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It would help with readability if you add quotation marks to denote when someone is speaking. In your story it is sometimes difficult to tell when a person is speaking.
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 19:07 CDT
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hey... can you like.... use quotes please? it's really confusing.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 10:29 CDT
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I haven't actually read your story, I just took a glance. When I started to read it I had to stop because I got confused. You don't separate the dialogue from the description, so it makes it hard to follow. If you put in the quotation marks, its easier to follow. Sorry if I upset you, but I'm a sophomore in college, so I'm big on writing grammatically correct.
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