| "Yami Hawk" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: I SO LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is sooooooo funny you have got to update sometime soon! You can't leave me waiting forever!! I love Marik on here he's insane but sounds ever so cute when he speaks to his squeaky little Mr. Re was it? LOL You have got to update this soon! Take Care!! Laterz! LPGurl ^______________________^
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: YamiRavenFyre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RavenFyre:ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! I think this is the greatest story ever! Yami: Not bad. I got to kick butt RavenFyre: I, Myself, am working on my own Seto/Yami fic. And your story just reminded me that i had to work on it... SOME MORE! Seto: (Weakly) Thanks... RavenFyre: Good job my pup! or should i say Griffin Seto: Oh would you look at the time... BYE! (Runs away) RavenFyre: Anyway. Good work! Conitune will ya... Please?
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Reviewed By: Beysie (I don't remember logging out!) On: November 27, 2004 23:00 CST
Comment/Review:
ROFL Damn, that was hilarious! I'm not sure who was off balance more (I refuse to count Marik into that one), Kaiba or Yami! This is great, please update soon! I can't wait to read about the date...
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Reviewed By: Savanna On: November 27, 2004 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cool/hilarious! Please update SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: PyroDragon117 On: November 19, 2004 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... Hyper match-making Bakura and Marik, a nervous Yami, McDonald's.... THIS IS HILARIOUS AS EVER!!! I LOVE !!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Tranquility_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 01:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue this! Gods. This is so funny!! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: XxxInukuraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHAHAHAHAHAHA tht was hilarious in a stupid/funny way! LOL even though Marik (Yami marik) is my favorite character and you totally make him seem like a 5 year old it's funny. And the image of him hangimng from a fan in Mcdonalds hadme rolling around of the floor laughing hysterically. Literally rolling on the floor. Ok well update soon.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 04:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn near peed my pants laughing, I love this! Please, pretty please with Seto on top update this soon?! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I love this, it is hilsrious. Marik and Bakura are just too cute in this.
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