| "Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, brilliant plot! I can't wait to see what happens, are you planning an update anytime soon or will I have to suffer? Please please please, I need more! I love this story :-) Oh, and with only a few grammatical errors - for example, it's not "threw" but "through"...I think you might have done that a few times. Otherwise, it was pretty easy to understand. More? *blinks* Please?
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Reviewed By: sugar_coated_lemons On: December 06, 2004 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really love the story so far!^^; Plz write more soon^^;
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: fudge On: November 01, 2004 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geeeez! is sooo sad in the beginning but I can tell is going to be a pretty good story just from this two chapters! I just hope Karou doesn't stay a ghost then how would that work out? neway I think you should update pretty soon 'cause is ooo good and I can't wait!keep up the work! Karen
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Reviewed By: Trivillan On: October 31, 2004 04:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good so far. I hope you keep up the great work on this fic.
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Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 (not signed in) On: October 29, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the story is not boring so far. I hate the whole government, Hilary should have run for president. Oh well, i guess pickers can't be choosers.UPDATE!!! I WANT FICTION!!!!Bai!!
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Title: Eternity
Reviewed By: star stalker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter...Wowee! I can't wait for the next chapter for very long so, please please please please please please please update really really really really quick! star stalker ^_^
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Title: Oh... Wow.
Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 (not signed in) On: October 24, 2004 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!!!That was so awesome!!!This is the first fic that I have actually wanted to go up to the writer and hug!!! Of course, it could also be the fact that they are actually airing RK again after a year of deprivacy. Even though I have seen it a million times, I was still doing the Rk dance that i made up. And I was singing "freckles" in my sleep. Atleast thats what my mom says. well, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: LunaGoddessOf Foxes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 18:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow that was really good It brought a tear to my eye
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Title: Eternity
Reviewed By: star stalker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great startto what i can tell will be a great story! Update with the next chapter as soon as possible! ^_^
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Title: good start
Reviewed By: reene24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start. I can't wait to see where this story ends up.
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Reviewed By: De Lazy Lady Lime On: October 16, 2004 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! I like it.. it was sad but I like it SOOooooooOOOoo MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE Porfavori!
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