| "The Real Folk Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 17:06 EDT
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Good chapter, update soon please
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Title: ooh!!!
Reviewed By: person-sama On: June 20, 2005 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me liky chapter but when is hiei coming in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 11:37 EDT
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Good chapter, love the length. Please update soon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: thebeautybehindthemask (notlogged in) On: June 19, 2005 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow funny i like it alot though i wished you update faster but it still rocks! update soon
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 01:53 EDT
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poor yuske what ever will kags do to him? *evil thoughts run through mind*
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 00:49 EDT
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hahah now i can
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Title: srry
Reviewed By: ookami san the anime lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 00:47 EDT
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i (for some reason)can not loggon and review sry for the nick name i can,t remember why i put (and writer of great perportions)
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Reviewed By: ookami san the anime lover(and writer of great perportions) On: June 02, 2005 00:43 EDT
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if this is a kag kubara fic i swear i'm gonna stop reading.... that would soooo ruin it . and it's so well done! so butifully detailed and worndrfully in character.... i mean the characters are so perfectly portraied acpecially(srry can't spel)kagome....... the way she feels about herself and her humbelness no to mention her self hateing bit that is just so frigen awsome.
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Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: May 16, 2005 19:57 EDT
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*dancing to the numa numa dance* yay, another chappie! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei - too lazy to log in On: May 13, 2005 19:30 EDT
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Hmmm Hiei mated already. Wonder who it could possible be to lol Please update soon.
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Title: yayness!
Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask (not logged in) On: May 08, 2005 12:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow kuroune and youko fluff its so heart warming I love it but when is hiei going to come in? when is kurama going to meet kagome? when is yuusuke going to know about kazuma and kagome? oh please update faster i'm dying here let me know!!!!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 20:26 EDT
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*applauds* Much better! I like how you are showing that youko is more than just a leacherous fox. Very waffy moment between youko and kuronue there. I still noticed a couple of your word choices that could have been better, and while i am positively thrilled that you are starting to use commas, you are still having a problem with run-on sentances. The best advice i can give you is to read through the chapter two or three times before you post it. It's amazing how many stupid mechanical errors, and sentences that just sound awkward you can catch and fix by doing that. You never understand how much things like that take away from a story until they are fixed. Also, if you think it would help, i'd be willing to give betaing a whirl. I just really want this story to live up to the potential i know is there. Well, i guess that's about it for this chappie. So drop me an email if you feel like it, or i'll just hang around until you post the next chapter! Ja!
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Title: the real folk blues
Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 13:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i love your stories there so cool and intriguing! i love them so much! oh yeah i saw your profile on photobucket your such a cute chick!...at least i thought you were a chick no offense but you make a cute guy or girl. don't take that as harassment or anything ok. well i wanted to ask you if you were going to consider my request? remember i asked you if you can cowrite a fic with me well write to me back if your interested oh and sorry about your computer hope you get anew one well update when you can bye bye! ^_^
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Title: queen of hearts killer
Reviewed By: update! On: April 13, 2005 16:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where is this story going not that i'm complaining its just a question i like it update
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 19:40 EDT
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*preens* All in a day's work, me lassie, all in a day's work. But just to make sure we're clear, it wasn't that i didn't know what the words meant, they were just being used out of context. Anyway, this chapter fixed that problem, but seems to have made another more obvious. Commas are your friend, my flattened fruit, while run-on sentences are not. Now that the constructive criticism is out of the way, we can get to more important things, like, when are we going to find out what's going on with kagome and hiei? You let that little tidbit slip about her knowing who he is, she actually called his name when she was in trouble, then you just left it! The suspense is killing me here! Oh, and i was wondering, did any cookies come with that jar? Because i think it only fair that you share the wealth with the person responsible for that wonderful new pilsbury doughboy jar, ne? Hehe. Either way, i am really enjoying this story, and hope you update soon!
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