| "A Girl Named Yama" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: shadow_kazul [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the cruelity of that! Darn i was hoping there would be some romance. Keep on posting your stories are still excellent.
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Title: AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY, you update! Awww, that was a great chapter... I hope they start making out... and doing stuuuuuuffffff... THROW IN A LIME SCENE! ehehehehe... those are always fun! hmmm... i like how Kakashi threatened his own students! I like how you\\\'re changing the storyline from the original Naruto series... and not making it sound wierd... KAKASHI\\\'S HOT!!!!!!!!! again, THROW IN A LEMON/LIME SCENE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahem... better update soon! Love ya sooooooooooo much! Aishiteru, Silver Dragon-samaaaaaaaaaaaa! Akina
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading all the chapters in one day. I have to say, I loved all of the cliff hangers! It's a very good story! I'm dying to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Drooooooool... Update soon! Put lemon/lime scenes!!!Wahahahahaha! So many cliffhangers... literally! Hope I see the next chapter up soon! Love ya, Akina!
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON BECAUSE THIS STORY ROCKS! And i'm curios as to what happens next... Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww, geez! How many times do I have to say this? This fic is awesome! Wonderful! ETC.
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* This fic is lovely, as always... *sniff* When will you update? Akina
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Reviewed By: cutie_chan_XD3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! Hey, are you going to put any lemon/lime scenes in here? I hope you do! eheeheehee... UPDATE quick! Akina
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