| "A Girl Named Yama" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: amelita On: January 03, 2009 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, read the whole thing in two days. There is one thing that is bugging me a little bit though. If the Sharingan is matrilineal, how does Yama have it seeing as it was her father that was Uchiha? If you're going to explain this later, tell me to shush and hold my horses. Otherwise it seems to be something that could cause problems in the future; especially since her halfie status is becoming very important to the story line. Looking forward to the rest of Yama's tale. May the muses let your fingers fly.
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Title: Keep going
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont stop now girl! I wanna know what's gonna happen next.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with Wolfram01 that you need to update some more I'm dying over here! You rock and so does your fanfiction too!!
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: bloodkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. wow. im speechless! THIS WAS THE BEST FANFICTION IVE EVER READ!!!!!! dude!!!!!!! holy muther of flying cows- keep updating plz!!!! *gives author a gigantic cookie
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Title: you rock
Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yu gotta update soon. I'm dying over here! I love your work so much!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rosaline [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really glad I found this story!
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Title: >3
Reviewed By: Nakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work! I read it on another site but you only had a few chapters out, I was so happy to find it here with more chapters! I can really relate to Yama, that's why I enjoy reading but also, it has Kakashi! Keep going! Also, as a side note: Where did Yama get the Kakashi PJs? I want a pair! XP
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Reviewed By: tiggermoogle814 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story! You managed to make a character with a bloodline limit and not make them a Mary-Sue, congradulations. I just realized that I accidentally clicked on the wrong story when I went to review this... I don't even know what story that I clicked on... I do know that it was a Yu Yu Hakusho story though... So now I feel like an idiot... Anyways- I'm glad that someone made a character that can't cook... very well... In fact, she cooks like me! ^_^; Which really doesn't count as cooking... Unless you count toast. I can 'cook' that, but anything that needs to be hot and doesn't come in a can or a box, I can't make it and make it edible. I couldn't follow a recipe to save my life. Well, I could follow it, it just wouldn't turn out well... And I don't know why you'd be interested in this, or why I'm telling it to you... Anyways, I'm not very fond of yaoi, but I don't really mind it in this story. Please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Muffin_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having trouble realizing how wonderfully talented and skillful are writer you are? Well you’re in luck, I’ve got the cure for that! I’ll tell you! So beautiful and eloquently written, even when pressed for time. I thought it was going to be the same old, same old, but you put such a spin on everything to make it refreshingly original Kakashi/FOC is my favorite pairing! Not to mention when a story as wonderful as this comes along ANYONE would love it. I LOVEEE how you portrayed itachi, what a lovely way to spin the story. I say “love†a lot I know, but I can’t wait for you to update. I’m dying to read more!
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Title: yaaay
Reviewed By: Kakashi x3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey :] awesome update!(as usual) I got my laughs from the feud between kakashi and itachi and sasuke and itachi and ESPECIALLY Yama and Itachi, looove it. haha, well it was worth the wait! I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read about Zabuza and Haku! X] Exciting, very exciting! Once again, excellent work, I hope to see more soon!
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Title: Greatness!
Reviewed By: Iubirea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Just wonderful! You have to update soon! Please!*begs*
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Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 17:09 CDT
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*sniffle* Gomen...I know you just updated a few weeks ago but please write some more? This was one of the first fanfics I read in MM and I love it...T-T
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Reviewed By: ImLoRd-ItAcHi On: August 20, 2005 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u no wat? U REALLY ROX N ROX N ROX ROX ROX ROX! any wayz, i got a suggestion fer ya. y dun u make akatsuki go after itachi n the boss, akat sama, reveal his face n fight wif itachi?
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Reviewed By: k-chan66 On: August 16, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this fanfic! it's the best kakashi fanfic that i have ever read. props on the creativity and fusing your story with the Naruto plotline. UPDATE SOON!!! ^___^
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Sakura Li Samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo this thing took me 2 days to read and i love it!!!!! When is the lemon coming???? and i hope you update soon!
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