| "Of Dragonballs and Duel Monsters" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Confusion
Reviewed By: Lady_BlkDia07 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Now you had me interested in this crossover, but now I'm confused with all of thee OOCs flying about in your story and how they relate to the DBZ cast. At first I thought is was gonna be explained in the beginning when I saw the mention of Bulma and Vegeta...and now I just don't know. You do great work, but its abit weird that I'm seeing alot of OOC and only the original characters of Yu-gi-oh and none of DBZ. just sayin. 4rm da blk chick$$$ |
Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 03:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neat! Why did they seperate? How did the other DBZ characters react to that? They can still win though, right?
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Reviewed By: Cori Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool! I like it! can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 09:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
There names all have a city from that country in it. Wouldn't callingt the shadow realm just even the playing field because of Yugi and friends? Good work!!
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 05:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So why the rewrite? Not really noticing any difference. Will he tell her about Yami now? Keep up the good work!!
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Title: I get the name joke!!
Reviewed By: WolfsBane [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 20:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
Their last names are cities from their country. Miraku Nagata=Japan Marion Vegeta=Australia(Doesn't count) Akira Wales=England Takeshi Rio=Brazil Chujitsu Montreal=Canada Sean Dublin=Ireland.
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Reviewed By: Stormyronin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 05:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Has she met Yami yet? You had them talking about it but never showed or mentioned it afterwards. Will the Pharoah get to play now? Love to see the DB gangs reactions.
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Reviewed By: Stormyronin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 15:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, never read a crossover of these two before. When will she meet Yami and how will she react? Keep going!!
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Reviewed By: YamiYugiMoto On: October 17, 2004 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is interesting, I can't say much, since we arent really into the story, but I like it and im sure to keep an eye on it.
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