| "Kizu" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) Thank you so much for updating the story. And Sesshomaru was so kind to Kagome.The war however was fine, you just happen to have a very amazing athuor that has described a very bloody war with very fine details. please update soon, I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.
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Title: Another good chapter!
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead...not logged in On: December 12, 2004 01:35 CST
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Oh, I didn't think you were stealing ideas, I just saw the similarity and wondered if I had found another fan of that book. Anyway, this is another great chapter, and I'm really enjoying your story. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my dear Lady K you warm my heart with your praise.but i'll always reveiw when i get my chance dont worry.&no i dont think sessh is a good nurse either{s}i heard that wench:me: ^_^ what?{s}*growls*:me:i thought so as i was saying i loved the lil poem you had as the AN &i dont think this cahppie was too angsty it was war CARPIEM DIEM*evil laugh*so you going to make him sappy huh?hehehe{s}NO this sesshomaru is never sappy:me:really...and thats why you got me those chocolates and my books for christmas{s}i never... wait those were for christmas:me:oops *laughs and runs while sessho chases*(k)poor me well fijita was right the war did freak me out. [y]so sessho is going to get sappy huh this i got to see{s}shut up you welp[y]catch me if you can *runs*(k)children*shakes head*hey teiya whens dinner?:me:its in the oven(k)ok i'll save some for you liked the chappie &fujita seems really nice but why does she let the other demons talk about her like that?see ya later:me:ya puter back *claps*man i can think of some evil things to do to sessho*rubs hands evilly grins*[y]uh brother i think your woman is planning something{s}she usually is sometimes its good,sometimes evil &sometimes very pleasurable[y]i didnt need to know that{s}should i be worried?[y]with that grin i think so:me:i wonder if when said &done will she ended up killing him like he keeps dreaming?*sighs*next chappie please ^now back to our regular scheduled program^:me:ok who gonna beat the other 1t(k)dunno |
Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhh! I can actually see Sesshomaru killing all those people! That not a very pretty picture althought it very bloody, but at least kagome isn't going into the fight, yet? please update your story.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: December 08, 2004 15:51 CST
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awesome story. I can't wait to read more. =)
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
+mir+ so i distract you huh? lets see...^san^ get away from her +mir+ aahhhh help me *runs*{s} ha finally im acting the way i should be, why is this sesshomaru being nice to the human?(k)cause you like me in this fic thats why[y] o shut up (k) youre just mad that saki likes miroku more than you[y] *growls*{s} yes go away mutt[y] i wouldnt gloat saki seems to like miroku a bit more than you too {s} O_O :me: excuse me this is my puter let me write &let her know im still here to read & review (k) but we had it 1st &... :me: yes this i know BECAUSE I had to work to get money to pay the bills to use the internet & the electricity to run the puter now as i was saying {s} dont forget to praise her woman :me: *growls* look here milord I AM NOT WOMAN I AM TEIYA TEI-YA [y] i am woman hear me roar @_@ *smacks yasha* k/mir/san/sessho* *laughs* :me: whats so funny *growls* O_O nothing its just you hit yasha &... he... @_@ *me smacks all* if you keep this up you all can cook for yourselves the next holiday #everyone# NO.... :me: as i was saying *bows* gomen gomen so sorry Lady Saki K i humbly beg your forgiveness they changed the mall hours & i work longer & sleep less *sigh* now about the new chappies ^_O oooooooooooo love them love them poor kag but she finally got away from kikyou &naraku for now so sessho let her join his army poor sessho & kag i like this new character fujita shes great kinda jealous but now liking kag (uh maybe a lil???) (k) ?_? he |
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 19:30 CST
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Your story is very good. The only thing I would say is that you should find a beta because you have a few spelling and grammatical errors. Besides, that, I think that your story is incredibly well written, and I would urge you to continue with it. I am wondering if you have read Joy Luck club? Parts of it seem reminiscent... not that I think your story is unoriginal in any way. It's very good! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 12:44 CST
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I really did like this chapther, but when Fujita said that to Kagome, did she mean it as in a boyfriend/girlfriend way? Cause I'm kind of an ookkaaaayyyyyy way. Update soon, Thank you.
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: December 05, 2004 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So...Fujita has a thing for Kagome? Or was she just saying that?
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Reviewed By: ame-chan (not logged in) On: November 27, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really, really captivating story! Please write more!!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: November 27, 2004 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not going to stop reading cause its a Sesshomaru/Kagome paring. That's actually my favorite paring! I was just curious, so I asked. Can't wait for the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 18:54 CST
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How cruel, though I don't blame Sesshomaru, but still that was crue. Could he at least do something about Inuyasha's death. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: LadySessho [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[y] *blink blink* i'm dead... i knew she like my brother more but... *howls* {s} oh shut up you mutt. and you had better keep your promise that i'm to be in the next chapter, or... :me: or what love? what promise? hey get away from the puter. and dont threaten saki like that or we wont see another chapter for weeks. good to see you back saki we missed you [y] keh speak for yourself (k) well i missed her. your just mad cause... :me: can i have the puter??? as i was saying, we missed you and your wonderful stories. {s} hush woman your still upset cause she completed oden shop :me: *pouts and throws something at sessho* but she still doing this one and i entend for her to finish it too. and hopefully start another one... please, pretty please, with a cherry one top? {s} stop begging woman. only to me are you allowed. :me: allowed???? and who do you think you are? (k) uh saki great to hear from you but im leaving now so that im still alive for your next chappie later love [y] think i'll join her. i guess i still love you too but kill that naraku for me. :me & s: *fighting in background* ^mir^ finally i get the puter. uh hey im not in this fic *pouts* i was in the last one i thought you liked me *smack* @_@ hey what was that for +san+ lecher stay away from her or i'll... ^mir^ hehehe jealous??? :me: hey my puter {s} give it up woman :me: i have a name and its not woman *growls* {s} uh uh teiya my love my precious. fine *sighs* fine please a new chappie soon. happy? :me: yes la |
Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 20, 2004 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I can't believe you did that! I thought that this was going to be an Inuyasha/Kagome fic and you kill him off right after her father dies! That's so cruel! By any chance is this going to be a Sesshomaru/Kagome fic or is Sesshomaru going to appear and somehow save Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess - not logged in On: November 13, 2004 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap...I have another question. I think every time I reviewed I have asked something. Anyways, my question is if Sesshomaru and Inuyasha hate each other or if they just went their separate ways in the story? Cause Inuyasha doesn't actually sound like he hates him…
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